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Description If I recycled
the love littered at your feet
                hearts would starve no more.
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Comments: 278

xxLadyBugxx In reply to ??? [2008-10-21 23:35:36 +0000 UTC]

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venividiexii In reply to ??? [2008-10-20 04:44:57 +0000 UTC]

Good n' Gloomy.

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oldest-boy In reply to venividiexii [2008-10-20 14:32:03 +0000 UTC]

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wellwornwings In reply to ??? [2008-10-20 01:53:21 +0000 UTC]

this knocked me down.
* beams *

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oldest-boy In reply to wellwornwings [2008-10-20 14:34:04 +0000 UTC]

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Little-Horse-Friend In reply to ??? [2008-10-20 00:19:35 +0000 UTC]

It's so short...yet it still says so much! Very well done

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oldest-boy In reply to Little-Horse-Friend [2008-10-20 00:41:30 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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Little-Horse-Friend In reply to oldest-boy [2008-10-20 01:19:24 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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KneelingGlory In reply to ??? [2008-10-19 04:03:30 +0000 UTC]

Ah, that's perfect <3

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oldest-boy In reply to KneelingGlory [2008-10-19 17:23:43 +0000 UTC]

i try.

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Amertie In reply to ??? [2008-10-19 01:20:36 +0000 UTC]

my heart is hungry.
and this is one of the best haiku's i've read.

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oldest-boy In reply to Amertie [2008-10-19 17:24:14 +0000 UTC]

thank you,
that's a wonderful
compliment.

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Ladyknight17 In reply to ??? [2008-10-19 00:21:56 +0000 UTC]

Very pretty.

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oldest-boy In reply to Ladyknight17 [2008-10-19 00:31:51 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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Ladyknight17 In reply to oldest-boy [2008-10-19 05:44:14 +0000 UTC]

Welcome.

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peace-love-ganja In reply to ??? [2008-10-18 23:59:01 +0000 UTC]

I really like this one, best thing I've read today

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oldest-boy In reply to peace-love-ganja [2008-10-19 00:31:04 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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Garnet-43 In reply to ??? [2008-10-18 23:25:00 +0000 UTC]

What an image!

Three lines speak volumes.

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oldest-boy In reply to Garnet-43 [2008-10-18 23:32:22 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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r-mitchell In reply to ??? [2008-10-18 23:19:36 +0000 UTC]

"love littered at your feet"
great image. this is beautiful.

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oldest-boy In reply to r-mitchell [2008-10-18 23:33:12 +0000 UTC]

thank you, kind sir.

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MissYouQuiteTerribly In reply to ??? [2008-10-18 22:48:05 +0000 UTC]

Short and sweet
This is wonderful!

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oldest-boy In reply to MissYouQuiteTerribly [2008-10-18 23:33:24 +0000 UTC]

thank you, very much.

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TheObviousChild In reply to ??? [2008-10-18 19:39:56 +0000 UTC]

You've been writing haiku for a matter of... what, days?! This is freaking awesome.

I really hope you're going to carry on sending your work out to magazines/ getting it published. You're a star waiting to happen.



PS: I put your interview up just now on ONS!

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oldest-boy In reply to TheObviousChild [2008-10-18 23:32:55 +0000 UTC]

woohoo

you're too good to me.

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formaniac In reply to ??? [2008-10-18 17:52:58 +0000 UTC]

I'd take recycled love
Great poem.

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oldest-boy In reply to formaniac [2008-10-18 17:57:33 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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