rockchick9999 [2006-04-25 18:34:15 +0000 UTC]

short and sweet!


check out my stuff if you can be bothered...

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sleepingsoul7 [2006-04-25 15:03:18 +0000 UTC]

"wherever you are, you just can't seem to get a break"
can relate to that. one of the big reasons i think i may quite writing is bc when i do i get into that critique mode where i'm always writing in my mind and correcting other ppl's stuff. not just enjoying it, but fixing it all up and finding every wrong. can't stand it

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fishstyx [2006-04-25 07:27:31 +0000 UTC]

you seem to be doing alot of short poetry lately...
I guess it's about saying alot with a few words...
makes me imagine
that wherever you are
you just can't seem
to get a break -_-'

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mediatedballe [2006-04-24 18:15:12 +0000 UTC]

I got some really nice images from this.

"Warm water in the tub still curling…"

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FAT-MAN-5000 [2006-04-22 19:20:20 +0000 UTC]

short but rith to the point i like it alot you make me imagen it so well

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uk-antalya [2006-04-21 22:41:39 +0000 UTC]

So creative. Nice work . Cong .

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Fantagora [2006-04-21 20:14:39 +0000 UTC]

Great poetry!!!

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