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Ok, why am I uploading this? well, I want some tips on how to improve this picture. This is just a scrap and I am going to redo the whole thing later but since its the first page i want some pointers on what's good and whats not. As I said it's going to be the frontpage of a comic that I am working on which is called Descend. The whole feel of the comic is going to be kind of gothic like with angels, devils and such, so its going to be quite serrious. I wanted the first page to be painted very sloppy so no outlines on the picture, just lots of colors and smudging. I hope you guys can tell by just watching but since i am not so very sure you can I am going to explain what its supposed to look like. Its supposed to be kind of like a big city and then in the middle of the whole thing there's a bright light and a girl (even tough you can't see that on the picture) descending from the sky. For the logo, I am going to paint on freehand later. But even so, what do you think about it? I think it's pretty cool, the feel of it i mean, the wing on the right side looks kind of cool I think...

So, flame this little skech 'till it catches on fire, but of course I want you to say what you like about it too.

Thanks!

Description
Ok, why am I uploading this? well, I want some tips on how to improve this picture. This is just a scrap and I am going to redo the whole thing later but since its the first page i want some pointers on what's good and whats not. As I said it's going to be the frontpage of a comic that I am working on which is called Descend. The whole feel of the comic is going to be kind of gothic like with angels, devils and such, so its going to be quite serrious. I wanted the first page to be painted very sloppy so no outlines on the picture, just lots of colors and smudging. I hope you guys can tell by just watching but since i am not so very sure you can I am going to explain what its supposed to look like. Its supposed to be kind of like a big city and then in the middle of the whole thing there's a bright light and a girl (even tough you can't see that on the picture) descending from the sky. For the logo, I am going to paint on freehand later. But even so, what do you think about it? I think it's pretty cool, the feel of it i mean, the wing on the right side looks kind of cool I think...

So, flame this little skech 'till it catches on fire, but of course I want you to say what you like about it too.

Thanks!