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pangjunmin — Away from you
Published: 2011-03-31 02:37:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 309; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 4
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Description This is for you girl, you know who you are
Just a little poem, from me to you
Cause the distance between us is so far
And for now, this is all i can do

I don't know when i fell for your charms
But when you're sleeping between my arms
You make it so i can't even think
Our hearts beating perfectly in sync

I don't know if this is what they call love
But you're the only one I can think of
I wish i could give you more than just words
Something else that you would've preferred

Girl, i just can't get you out of my mind
When you're not with me i just can't unwind
Every time seems to be inopportune
But baby, trust me, i'm coming home soon
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Comments: 5

emilywinters [2011-04-11 01:02:37 +0000 UTC]

Oooh, this is very good. I don't know if you don't capitalize I deliberately, but it's an interesting factor.

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teen-artlover [2011-04-04 07:34:37 +0000 UTC]

I think it's written perfectly. Go ahead and show it to the girl you like, I think she'll really love it!

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August95 [2011-04-02 14:44:32 +0000 UTC]

I would love it a guy gave me this! Its perfect the way it is!!

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SOHKES [2011-03-31 13:09:02 +0000 UTC]

i think it flows well for most of the time...n i can totally relate to it...u shud check out some of my stuff ud find we have alot in common

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Kakashi-Is-So-Cool [2011-03-31 02:44:20 +0000 UTC]

Wow this is absolutely perfect as it is
I love it
Good luck!

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