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Published: 2012-08-24 03:17:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 76799; Favourites: 998; Downloads: 1151
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Finally finished my first comic, learned a lot about Illustrator while making this, heck, it's visible from the first frame to the last where my improvements are. Let me know what you think.Related content
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A cruel joke, but I can't resist smiling.
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Well, at least she wasn't still holding the squirrel what Applebloom shot the rifle...
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THIS JOKE IS MORBIDLY BAD AND YOU SHOULD FEEL BAD!!
(I'm feeling bad for laughing so hard, for sure XD )
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Hehe, I did consider adding blood, but I thought it was morbid enough, and I don't like thinking of MLP as 'bloody' or anything of that sort.
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How did she fire the gun?
I don't understand hooves
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Didn't you read Fallout: Equestria!
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Its on my to read list, though I never rly got into the fallout series
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Funny, but I feel for fluttershy.
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Dash: "I need something fast like a BULLET..." *BANG!*
Fluttershy: "..."
Dash: "... to keep up with me."
*THUMP*
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I love how it's Scootaloo who's actually shocked about what just happened.
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Not sure if I should laugh my ass off or feel bad for that poor squirrel.
...
I pick the former
XDDDDD
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i wish fluttershy would find out what the cmc did. i just want them to get beaten up for making fluttershy cry
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BUHAHAHAHA, oh that's funny!
Poor Fluttershy though
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How do you pull a trigger with hooves?
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Applebloom can use magic?
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Yea, through her ribbon? Oh wait, the Ribbon just protects her from all status ailments.
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The CMC will probably get warning/caution signs for Cutie Marks... Those three are hazardous to your HEALTH!!!
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Applebloom will get a "Danger" Cutie Mark, Sweetie Belle will get a 'Hazardous", and Scootaloo will get a "No Fly Zone".
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Isn't there a "Chicken Crossing" sign that Scoots could have?
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Ooh, that's horrible!
I can't stop laughing!
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The only things that bug me here is the space between Sweetie Bell's eyes and right ear, as well as the body shape of Fluttershy in panel #4. They look weird, but perhaps it is just a matter of the angle and perspective?
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I see what you're talking about. I think I needed to fix the chin on sweetie belle and move her eye over a tad. I'm still learning how to draw ponies honestly, I hope to improve.
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They do look really good though. So these are small complaints. โฅ
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It's ok, I like the feedback. I was going to ask for Critiques, but I think I'll do that when I stop critiquing myself.
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You'll never stop critiquing yourself. That is basically an artist's job description.
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I was thinking Fluttershy would have grabbed the wrong squirrel but this is unexpected O_O
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"Well I'm not getting a cutie mark in marksmanship..." Well certainly fucking not! By Tartarus; no, Sweetie Bell. *takes rifle* Where in Celestia's name did you three even get this thing?
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At the local Sears, where else. 15ยข a bullet is a hard price to beat!
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*Goes to blow up Sears International head-quarters*
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So funny. And very good drawings.
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she didnt even get it from the tree...
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Punishment from Fluttershy in three...two...one...
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Time-Out, young lady! I cannot believe you, Applebloom. Applejack will hear of this....
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Same with you Sweetie!
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Fluttershy's not a hair trigger monster, numbnuts...
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Not that kind of punishment!
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At first, I thought maybe Fluttershy grabbed the wrong squirrel and it fell to the ground. The Cutie Mark Crusaders was a funnier twist.
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Actually that was my original idea. I was 90% done with the comic until I found out that ~Neroq had a basically identical comic, and I didn't want to use someone else's idea. So I came up with the alternate ending 5 minutes later, I think it came out better this way.
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