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Published: 2016-05-15 16:11:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 7460; Favourites: 349; Downloads: 192
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continuing to working hard to upgrade my artsRelated content
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Wow this is amazing! Is this from a movie or game or something that already exists? Or did you make all this up yourself? 
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thank you and yes it come from my brain
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That's really good, you could make a whole story out of something like that ^^ We need to bring back "space opera" as a term again anyway lol
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what i need is a good storyteller to write my idea
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Not me, I am not very good at prose x.x Hope you can find someone though ^^
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yeah thank when i found you certainly see something on deviant art
or elsewhere
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you are right we need more originality in scify
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Perfect boxart for a 70s-era toy spaceship.
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yeah thanks very encouraging to me to read comment like that thank you so much
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I like the image, and there's a lot I can say in complement to it, but as your previous comment states, you're looking for feedback on what you can do to improve, so that's what I'll give.
Firstly, it's difficult to give feedback without context. That's where a good description can come into play, explaining what is happening and such. That said, There's little contextual description to this image, so I'll assume there is a fleet on standby at a friendly station world.
That said, with the station in the background it feels like there should be more activity in the image. Supply ships docking and departing, transports loading, patrol craft scanning suspicious vessels, and even on the focused craft. EVA Personnel can be out and giving checkups on the exterior of the ship, or drones if that fits the setting better.
Perspective-wise, everything is excellent except for the ships themselves, unless of course they're preparing to launch on a mission, which only the one in the midground to the right seems to give any evidence of. If they were in static position, they would be a bit more even to the level of the planet below, and if they were all preparing to leave they'd be in formation.
Hope this helps
-DL
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thank you to take the time to comment its very productive to me
i take note of your idea its great
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leave some comments and criticism to improve myself thanks
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