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Published: 2012-03-01 00:16:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 102; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Whelp meet the ever insane Muere

Name: Muere

Age: Mature enough that he would be an adult

Gender: Male

Breed: Standard

Power: To see into the future. He can only see little bits though (Stage one)

Mandala, Tribe or Loner: Loner

Personality: Childish. Hes can be considered insane with the things he comes up with. His power doesn't help

Relatives: none to be known.

Accessories: None


Unique traits/scars: Some scratches under his fur but hes in good condition

History: He was raised to a point he could take care of himself. Then abandoned for his insanity. He was since been wandering around on his own

Weakness: His insanity can get the better of him. Hes also not much of a fighter and more of a runner. He tends to have trouble solving problems and is slow to think

Likes: Food, dead leaves, Company, tribes

Dislikes: Getting hurt, Scary catori, rocks.
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Comments: 2

Azunara [2012-03-02 23:40:57 +0000 UTC]

Alright. Here we go.

The design itself is alright, though my only real nitpick is the blondish could be a bit darker. No big deal. Gryphon is pretty orangish himself. Agree with the eye color, most creatures don't have purple eyes.

Character itself.

While I think that you should have RP'd more with the other TWMers before getting a new character, I will admit that was my fault for not speaking up. I'd like to see you do more with Monsoon though, and definitely RP with the others for sure at some point so they can get to know you.

Personality could use some more work, as could in my opinion weaknesses. A bit more on his "insanity" would be nice. How does one know he is insane? What are his behaviors that clue one in on something is off?

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Silvadruid [2012-03-01 18:05:06 +0000 UTC]

He looks fine for the most part. You could consider changing the eye colour to something more natural but it's nothing major. You could also write more in personality, for example why he likes tribes and such. I'll get someone else to look at him before approving him.

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