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inkypoo1 [2018-06-16 23:25:27 +0000 UTC]

This is a great comic page, no doubt about it. Your lines are a little rough and sketchy for my taste, but you're clearly working on developing a well-rounded illustrative skillset and if you keep up the practice with some of the elements that you've used to create this page you're going to really create some amazing work in the future. Some of the technical stuff, like using perspective, obviously still needs work but it's easy to see that you've made a great start on learning to create images using it.

I think the two things that made the greatest impression on me here were that you've put a LOT of thought into this world/environment/concept, and there's absolutely no reason why it couldn't carry a tremendous story if you take it further. Also, your sense of image composition is amazing. Sure, the pictures themselves are a little rough, but your use of light/dark, close-ups, showing events occurring over time using multiple panels and image placement within panels are already off to an amazing start, and they show that you understand the medium of comics and how to exploit it as a storytelling medium.

I've only just started working on my first ever comic project myself, but one thing's for sure: You're already way ahead of me, and I look forward to seeing more pages soon

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