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shift-null — Embrace the Pain
Published: 2003-09-15 19:27:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 192; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 11
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Day after Day, hour on endHis life played out, lacking a friend
In the morning he lived, hurting inside
They stoned him, they kicked him, he tried not cry
He continued his path, amidst the words and the trouble
His spirit was wounded but still strong
Midday came and he lived, now rotting at his core
It would never end, this was his reality
He was the object of ridicule and resentment
That was his purpose, fighting it was pointless
His spirit was mamed, now strugling to stand
Evening passed and he lived, death's hand caressing his face
He made amends for his existence, but he would always be out of place
The tears won their battle, as they escaped his eyes
They felt no sympathy for him and kicked him for his weakness
His spirit was half way to the after life, long since comatose
Night arose and he lived, barely there in his mind
They lied, things wouldn't be better tomorrow
They lied, things wouldn't be better the day after that
They lied, He wasn't wanted, he had reason to be
Lies! Yet still he belived, the pain said "no", but the hope said "yes"
His spirit was revied, only to be murdered tomorrow
Day after Day, hour on end
His life played out, with pain as his only friend
Comments: 5
Lovely! I really enjoy the transition of time, one can see the deepness in the words you use... the expression of pain and the wounds can almost be felt you make them so real.. amazing work, well done!
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i understand more then you will ever know, ive broke so sorry if i cant comfort you, but this morning one of my best friends gave me a note which basicly said that she was going to kill her self. i have known her for 5 years and shes been suisidle and ive kept her alive all this time but this morning i broke and had to get her help. i hope you feel better though. sorry about that you dont have to hear about my problems its just umm yea... feel better
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Beautiful, the emotion of the pain is perfect. This is a really well written poem and I think a few of us can relate to it. Your poetry is really good. -_^
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Wow...dark and depressing. Your write poems often? When I used to write poetry these are the type I wrote. I really liked this poem, it's very sad and makes you want to just run and hug that guy. Very well done!
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you got across that hopeless feeling quite well. i can't exactly relate to this but i can understand. i think becoming numb to the words of others is the first and only step in helping that kind of thing.
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