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This is one of the Pages that I am doing for the Squeek and Shred story..I was going to go for an all pencilized art ( I was inspired by Adam Warren's Empowered style). I was planning on doing small stories of the characters cause I am not really into doing a longated story. Some stories will have connections to others, but no big long story of the characters will be created just yet.Wadayathink of the page?
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Hooootness bro U know Shreds one of my favorites! Im still waiting for you to do your version of Shred v.s Ed and Earl, to follow up that pic they had of all of them in alley! I did my version but yours would be a lot better!!!
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i'm totally feeling the fine pencil work, but, your color is the other half of your arsenal!!!if you
did rock a story, i would want to see color included...
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That's just awesome. It's a shame you don't want to turn this into a longer story, this could end up being an awesome web comic.
Still amazing, moar want.
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weres squeek! you said itd squeek and shred! lol
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Nice job on the drawing. Me likes.
I'm guessing the stories would be like those interview character thingies, only they give a better understanding to who they are and what they stand for. Again, me likes.
I'm not sure if this has been suggested to you, but maybe you can group all of them in one big comic book. Or maybe half of them in one comic book, and maybe the rest of the other half in another book. Either case, I wish you great luck on this.
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"Wow! That old geezer was right about that 'wax on , wax off' sh*t!"
I'd love to see you work the pencils thing. You may need to model those shadows in a more finished way , then tweak your scans a bit. I'm looking forward to seeing this. And get some broads in there! (Don't they got any ring girls at them chopsocky tournaments?)
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I think this stands to be a great 'third' page intro into a short comic. A little build up like shots of the arena for setting with the crowd and such and a second page with quick panels of fists and expressions would pull the reader in and keep them hooked so that you can progress with whatever happens after the match.
-RenDragonClaw
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He's doing what he does best. Knocking the fuck outta others.
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I had been hoping for some more Squeek and Shred feed. Nice that you haven't forgotten those characters.
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Will this story also shed light on the reason Tigris is such a whiny little schoolgirl as well?
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maybe tweak levels a bit. i thought of doing this too
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If you had to emulate someone, you could do worse than Adam Warren.
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Wow... Shred's clothing isn't tattered. Must have been a good day.
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The detailing is awesome. But it is difficult to see Shred in the top panel. Maybe we should be seeing more of his arm and fist. If he hits his opponent laterally instead of vertically and the rhino's head twists toward his right instead of upward, it might be a more dynamic picture. Otherwise, it's excellent.
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Very good start. even though you're only doing shorts for now, if you make enough of them, you could sell them together in one anthology. Just a suggestion.
And it would be nice to know how Shred and Squeak originally met...especially since I can't seem to find any real story info on both of them from your past illustrations. Sorry, that came off rather harsh.
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I like how you're paneling is layed out. you should try getting your hands on a minidraft it will help with shading in lines. look into a guy named arthur guptill and shading.
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Shred Upper:
90% Pure strength
10% Fluffy
All man power babeh!
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That's great. Now let's see if he's got a ground game.
(I hope you didn't mind, but I styled my main protagonist in Blood and Metal, Eric Krockett, as similar to Shred. I merely added bangs above his eyes, a cybernetic arm, and a Black Belt in Gracie Jiu Jitsu. I'd love to see those two spar for a bit. Shred might be a bit out of his element.
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Groovy.
I dunno, the penciled thing does look cool, but it also can look messy.
The fat dude kinda seems more like he'd be saying "Now this guy here!" rather than declaring Shred's victory though.
Also did he just elbow him down?! XD Damn.
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shred has a black belt? and there's no bandaid. how old is he in this picture?
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I admit I was waitting for a project like this for a long time from you! ♥ Been wantting to see the back story of shread and squeek and compeny
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man...rocksteady will probably feel that one morrow
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Ha ha nice Shred kicks the crap out that guy 
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