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Snowwire — Atir's Story part two- P41 END
Published: 2011-09-25 00:30:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 7942; Favourites: 247; Downloads: 24
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And then Atir turned forever emo. No really. He did.
There was going to be an "ahhh" speech bubble, showing that he screamed, but it just turned silly. I think you get that he is screaming.
For those saying "it wasn't his fault". Well actually... it partly was. Had he paid more attention or so... she might have lived. o^o
Well... the final page is done and submited. I do feel a little sad. ;3;
Thank you though for everyone that continued following this comic and for the support!
A better thank you is here: [link] and also some information about what I'll do now with comics for people who are interested.
ALSO, GO WATCH THIS ANIMATION ~Selsea012 DID: [link]
Art, Story and Characters © *Snowwire
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Comments: 350
Must feel great to actually finish something. Whenever I try to start a comic, I end up being too lazy to keep it going. I've really enjoyed reading this
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I does.
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I think that having no "ahhhh" scream really makes it that much more amazing.
I really like this comic, I'm sad to see it finish, but happy i got to see it completed at the same time? If that makes sense....
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Yeah I think it's better like that.
Yeah it makes sense, I'm glad you enjoyed the comic. 
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*sad face*
Sad ending, and a bit sad the comic's done. But it gives new opportunities^^
It was a wonderful comic till the end^^
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Indeed, thank you very much and thanks for reading.
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I HATE YOU. YOU MADE ME CRY FROM THIS.
Well I don't hate you, I am just depressed from reading all these!
;-;
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That was beautiful. TwT I'm so sad right now, its so tragic! But I love how real the ending was, it wasn't an "Oh they save her and they live happily ever after and make many babie together" thing. Bravo, bravo, you did an amazing job.
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Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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You are most welcome.
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Aww but your right it is partly his fault. But aww. ; - ;
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Yes, hadn't he dreamed away. ;3;
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What happens to him? D: I mean, after that, since the comic will not have a next page. I'm curious. Will he never ever forgive himself? D:
And yes, I loved the comic, it was very nice and I really love everything about it... beside Core's death DX
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No not really, he will always blame himself for it. Afterwards he shuts himself in more and becomes more serious then he already had been. He also becomes very protective over the group, always keeping himself on guard to make sure what happend doesn't happen again. ;w;
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this was such an interesting little comic, and i really enjoyed reading it.
actually, i think it was when i came across this little comic i decided to watch you. c:
the atmosphere is set really well in it, and i love the concept of something other than canines.
i would definitely love to see maybe a small follow-up comic of how life was afterwords, or just a simple picture explaining so. i dont know why, but i feel it might add more feeling to it c:
nevertheless, i think not having the speech bubble there adds more intensity.
i also like how the colors and emotional feelings, not to mention art, changed from beginning to end. makes it more interesting c:
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Thank you so much!
Thank you for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I bet I'll draw something showing him in his present now. c:
Again, thank you!
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i shouldnt really say little comic; i went back and read it again and it was much longer than i thought it was xD
and youre welcome hun! its well deserved.
ill definitely be looking forward to it : D and thanks for even taking my silliness into consideration!
you seem to have a lot of fans for this comic.<3
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Hehe yeah. x)
No problem. 
Yeah, it makes me so happy to see people liked it.
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This comic is so amazing, I'm sad that it's finished ;_;
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Thank you, yeah I'm a little sad too. ;w;
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I'm not crying... TT^TT I just got something in my eye.
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"Oh my gawd~ WHY?! Why core why?!" That's what I think he is saying when I see him screaming.
It's just so sad.
Well, it's wonderful you finished the comic. ^.^ Your style has changed so much since the first page! You've gotton so much better!
I loved this comic and enjoy the ending. No matter how sad.
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Nawww ;3;
Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it!
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;.; It's just so sad...
Your welcome! You're a very talented artist and I hope your style only grows. ^_^
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That will most likely happen. ^^
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;A; so sad and beautiful story! Beautiful piece of artwork!
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Thank you very much! ;w; <3
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Loved this comic! ...Even though now I'm crying. :/
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Awww I'm sorry ;A; But I'm glad you liked it!
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D: aww...I sad now....it's all over with *sniffs* A good story!
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N'aaaw ;3; *pats* Thank you! <3
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Most welcome Q _ Q I'll have to some fan art or something, I really liked this story...and miss it already.
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yeah... :3 I'll think of something sweet.
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Aww ;w;
I remember when you started doing this! I noticed you kept improving during the course of drawing this~ I'm sad it's over. :c
Poor Atir...poor Core.
Wonderful work though~
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I know, it feels nice to have improved so much. ;w;
Thank you very much for following the comic!
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...wait...WHAT?!
that's it?!
No big dramatic plot just... she dies?!
Oe
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
(good page though)
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Yeeeep~ that's what the story is about. c:
(Thank you <3)
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