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Description he ran

      and ran
             and ran
                   and ran

  ------->     into a    field
     that    held   no  flame, and  
   absolutely      no       sense      of       redemption.



                but     the     plants       wrapped       around    him,
       writhed       and     twisted in a rather archaic    way,
making   him   feel rather  
                            ......


                  [   alone   ]


and   he felt, as though he belonged here,
           entangled    in   chlorophyll.


and the trees were mistaken,
    when they said
"he'll never make it out of there"


        and all the while, he thought
   "it would be rather nice, to   fall   into    a    chasm, or to  fly  high into the
                                  
                                                           t r o p o s p h e r e."

  and     his    eyes   flew out of his skull,
       as   all  the balance in the world unfurled across his now dismembered skeleton.
    and   all  his   bones faced the sunrise, and  spread their   wings, thinking of  
                                  what    it   would    be    like     to    lose   oneself   in an   ocean


AND EVERYTHING IS ABDICATED - TO THE MAN WITH NO HANDS, and in an instant:
                 PointB finds himself in a rather  empty-seeming blackhole, with quite the assortment of dead spaghetti-bodies strewn about him in a rather disassembled and disembodied manner, and he floats across this vast expanse rather tranquilly, as he wonders
                          "what am I doing  h e r e?"


then, quite abruptly, and interrupting the conversation entirely,

                    his   
                          polonium-covered     alarm clock
            CHIRPS   on          [and]    off
    in        rapid     succession,     mimicking his mortified madness,
(CLI----CK CL!!! ICK  CL----..IC!!K!!!!!''!!'''''
'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''(rain falls)'''''''''''''''''''''''

                                      he     lit     a    cigarette, and promptly   blew it   out,
                           using   its ashes  as           a       rowboat,
   to sail across _ that now empty ocean
of  dead-spaghetti bodies, looking for what once made him a
                                         child.





    "  y e l l o w      b i r d  ,      w h a t   w e r e  y o u    l o o k i n g   f o r?


                          on top         of    topless          mountains,

                                     mounted                               with  

                             pretty                     flags,                      I'd love


                    to        go    


                       smok
                       -ing, Killer Clock,         cocked back in his chair. You've put on


                       smok
                       -ing, Killer Clock,         cocked back in his chair. You've put on


                           ai       nshot    flai           p ,   filiments of what
                           rs of   gu           rs, flaring u                     yo
                                                                                   u would have =!been!
      '
      '
      '
                      '
     !AND, did you see the signs,       '
         !   e                       '
         !   t  out for       '
!        h       '
!        e men with       '
r(ansomnotes)   never       '
a(round)    any       '
e(nvironments)    plans,       '   (look below! as above, so below!)
p(retty)     and               '
p(eel)         did you see       '
a(nd)                   the signs           '
s(ea)    singing       '
s(ee)     crooked               '
i trees       '
d(id) while       '
              pointB,                                                         '
                                        !        -  -    -    -     -   -   -  - - - .if you had stayed asleep
                                        !          .                                y           "
                                   broken gear,    .                       o           
                                killer clocks,     .                       u were sleeping,
                            we, we dont' steal here.                         our mothers died,
                                          ,.                                hey look! A yellow bird,


                                                            yellow bird, what were you looking for?

          choir calls out, pointB looks; a pendulum smile (curious boy, would you have stayed?)

  and did I hear you say/shout (across the islands, a pendulum smile)
          "I fly flags, flags, flags irriguous with red-wet,                  ---//(across  the islands, a pendulum smile(s))
       and I'm not lethargic, and these raindrops don't taunt me, no no no"
  '''''''''''''''''''Ra''''''''''''indrops'''''fall''''slowly'''''''     (blacksuit calls, a pendulum swings)
'''''''''''''k'''''''I'''''ll''I!'ng''''off'''''lives'''''with'''it's''''''
'''prodigal'''''''thiNgs''''''''
  
broken  clocks                            ( if you had)
don't tell time                                         (  killed ! when you could )
             with the panache    :   of several broken down buildings,

then perhaps this wouldn't be HAPPENING.

killing time, a killer clock, a ketamaine kabbala,
                         wreaking   havoc   with it's
                                   ________________ ( cool d  wn, blacksuit, it's
                                                                                o
                                                                                   only planB  ----
                                                   ( and did you  notice, that you're giving       off                                                                                           light?
                                                         [ gunsHOT! f l  e     s   __h
                                                                    I AM N t
                                                                         _o,   pendulum swings)

                                                       ( and   did    you  keep
                                                                     the clouds at bay?
                                                           [  gunshot filament, flesh I am not
                                                                        prodigal cadaver, [pendulum smiles, pointB wanders, and the sun falls upside down ] )

you know not these godhands, that you held in your skin,
        emblazoned with redwet,       pendulum sin
               pendulum points -> to the man with no hands
   PointB asks![nomanisisland]


    and he has no fingers!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
                     !or sight to see with
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!but still he asks questions, and smells deadflesh ahead, almost like a wolf!

                     "wh(at)
                      did(you)
                      see(that)night, pontious pilate,
                      when you sold your soul for godhands, covered in redwet, seeing sights, that should
   ///NEVER BE SEEN,
                      did you    touch - the  oceans,   or see across stars?
                              did you  feel -   the texture of blanksouls

                        r  e   a   c   h     i      n        g out over oceans, killing islands, all the while, A PENDULUM SMILES"


Y   E   L   L   O   W       B I R D,what were you looking for?
           on  top of topless skyscrapers,       adorned       with
                    pretty, pretty flags,
        ( flags, flags, flags fly ////)

Y E L L O W   BIRD, YELLOWB I R D,
I'd    love     to    go
                           set myself on fire.
        and someday I will.
someday, when the sun sets, unflinchingly.....



            ''''''''''(rain falls)''''''''''''''''''''''''''''
'''''''(unflinchingly)''''''''''''''(falling into oceans)'''''
'''''''''''''(and rising into streams)'''''''''''''''''''''''
'''''''(and it has no hands)''''''''''(but still it grabs you)'
''''''''''(and lifts you up)'''''(to a place beyondEarth)''''
'''''''''''''(so can you tell me)''''(is there life on mars?)'
''''("I don't know, I'm still talking with the stars....")'''


--------------------it was  of the worst sort.
(you) ------------------(devil)---------------(you)
         becuase   they   left no ------------------------(remainder)
-------------it was of the worst sort---------------
(little)------------(wolf)---------------(you)
      becuase       time was killed, and arrows were split, all the while, pendulum smiled

(and the cogs broke right off the gears, ran far far away, to a land without time
          and    everything   just  ----S T O P P E D--- (stopped))










they killed the ghosts ---------  
      and their wings grew like ivy,suffocating them with stale air,and informing them of their

                          ( HabeusCorpus )

  , before they were executed swiftly, guillotined, cut off without a thought,
                BUT THEY LIVED ON, THEIR BONES, THEY SHOWED
                                        a sense of regret
    AND THEY ROSE UP, THEIR SKELETONS GROWED,
                                up to face the sunrise

'''''''''''''(rain falls)''''''''''''''




were you sleeping when                ,"oh look!a bottle!
        i                                                               ,
f                 handed god, oh god, of some cast away
        e                              d
l                 o (pendulum)smile, preserved in the stale air,
        l asleep next to the g
                                           "

      like      trains I go, my boats, they go, and the man,

                        (theairistoothick)                

              and  the man,                    ("my baby's got dark brown hair")

                               (ohmygodiwanttoshootmyself)
                               with the three left hands,          ("I went swimming today in a waterless ocean)

                   he, he,                          he was never really there,
                                                        (!!shutup!!)

           ("can you believe he said that!?")

                        ----OHLOOK!ABOTTLE!, a hard rain's


            gonna fall, andohlook, pendulum,smiled.
                       


             the coffee killed it quick,

                            and he went back to work, that curious boy,
                                                 (do you think I could see the sky)
                 he stayed still     and stayed still  and stayed  s t i l l,
                             (if I tried to die)
                            the coffee killed it, quick, and he never woke up and there was
                                                         (and do you think)
                   so much work to do! and there were so many yellow birds,
                      (we could move quicker)
         so many oceans and so many skies and so many skeletons made pretty as petunias
                                                 (if we fashioned our legbones)
              and there were so little fingers and so many hands - - - - and so many faces and so many
                        (into ephermal wisps of willow?)
          sharp little teeth and there were so many ghosts, sons, daughters, and there were so many!

                                     ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !  ! ! ! ! !  ! ! ! ! !

!!!!!!!!!(ANDTHEREWASTOOMUCHGOINGONTOOMANYOCEANSDR OWNINGTOOMANYTOPLESSBUILDINGSITWASTOOMUC HANDTHEREWASTOOMUCHGOINGON)!!!!!!!!



     and so he ran so loud, and he ran



and he ran

      

    (the air was too thick)


                       (this suit's too tight)




        (this coffee's too hot)


and ran
             
                                 (everyone's deaf)




                (shut up)



  (let's go back to sleep)




                     (I don't really feel like going)

      (why are there so many excuses)






                                             (I'm so tired)






and ran
                   







                                       


                   (let's go)







                  (get out of here)









                                      (we'll be laughing so loud)






          (at the men in their little suits)





                       (running around like ants)










           (we'll be laughing so        l o u d)







                                         (no.)







and ran.



                            he smiled to himself, inwardly,

    knowing who he was, and knowing that,

            unlike that man, with the toomanyhands,

    he could always go back to work in the morning,

                            and he could always, he could always be alive.

                                      































































































(.and he hated it)
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Comments: 6

HexisR [2007-10-27 07:35:48 +0000 UTC]

This is unbelievable, mon cher~
Its so intense...
At first I had no idea what was going on but, all of a sudden, some gear just shifted in my head and i could understand everything~
Incredible, mon cher~

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Katriesen [2007-10-17 03:12:21 +0000 UTC]

The beginning almost seemed to make sense... and then the entire poem launched forward into this abstract intensity. It felt like more physical movement than words.

And the last line, oh what a kicker.

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tetrarchangel [2007-10-15 13:58:49 +0000 UTC]

An insane epic - so many levels, so many interpretations, a mythology crafted from scratch, truly awe-inspiring.

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Pandemoniumswings [2007-10-15 02:15:18 +0000 UTC]

Whoa!! F**cking awesome!!

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Diabolo-Spinner [2007-10-15 01:59:15 +0000 UTC]

Wow.

Now that's some prophetic writing right there.

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MrIgnominious1 [2007-10-15 01:57:18 +0000 UTC]

wow... that was intense. i love it when people use parentheses in poems, and the overall aesthetics of the poem are really good at visually conveying the rapid rush of thoughts for someone in his situation. its great.

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