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Published: 2007-03-05 18:47:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 101; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description
lovely
lame
ent
beauty-
full
star (E)
(the STARs / will sTOP/ and STARe)
! (!!) !
where
did you go to?
how (WHO//>. WHERE<.]] WHEN_(//HOW?))
did you get so
far (E?)
far/fare/fair?
wonder
_full
strato
sphere
how//how//how
did you get so
l
o
w
?
un
comp
are
(able)
sunlight
why do you
dis//appear
(appear//dissapear)
never can make up your mind
floating from point to point in the sky
love
ly
sun_
l i g h t
why do you run and hide?
oh wonderful
ex p L O D ing :;:;:..
nuetron star
why do you
disappear?
i see you
and then
you are
[G O N E]
where do you
go home to
and what do
you do?
you have to go somewhere
quality
of claMMer.
sOUND
of IMPloDE.
appearance of
whatever(is it BEAUTY orIS it DEATH?)
E Y E
( I )
doNOT
c AIR.
no, EYE/I
(those wonderful eyes inside)
do not care
(they will explode)
no, I
(and leave nothing)
am only air
(but AIR)
wonderful
lovely
ecstatic
reMORSE (code)
disAPPEAR/APPEAR/DISSOLVE/RESOLVE/IMPLODE/EXPLODE/DESTROY/CREATE
DESTROY/CREATE/DESTROY/CREATE/DESTROY/CREATE/DESTROY/CREATE/DESTROY/CREATE/
[ END OF FILE DENY DENY WHERE DO YOU RUN TO WHERE DO YOU HIDE? ]
deNY deNY deNY
why whI why?
{{ END OF FILE, DENY DENY, WHERE DO YOU RESOLVE, WHY DO YOU LIE? }}
[ EOF ]
(reSTART >> DESTROY)
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Comments: 2
Dirty-Paint [2007-03-08 02:25:36 +0000 UTC]
very nice; I'm not too sure about the meaning...I generally have some idea as to what a poem means, but I'm drawing up blanks right now. I might be tired :B .
Also, it's nice seeing a more experimental/deep poem on dA. I'm getting a bit tired of "LIFE IS PAAAAIN" poems.
Good job
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RAWR-im-Thunder [2007-03-08 00:14:57 +0000 UTC]
i really like it. i had fun reading it i like the way its set up. cool!
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