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Published: 2007-03-05 18:47:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 101; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description love
ly
lame
ent

beauty-
full
star (E)
(the STARs / will sTOP/ and STARe)
! (!!) !

where
did you go to?

how (WHO//>. WHERE<.]] WHEN_(//HOW?))
did you get so
far (E?)
far/fare/fair?

wonder
_full
strato
sphere

how//how//how
did you get so
l
o
w
?

un
comp
are
(able)
sunlight

why do you
dis//appear
(appear//dissapear)

never can make up your mind
floating from point to point in the sky
love
ly
sun_
l i g h t

why do you run and hide?


oh wonderful
ex p L O D ing :;:;:..
nuetron star

why do you
disappear?
i see you
and  then
you   are
[G O N E]

where do you
go home to
and what do
you do?

you have to go somewhere

quality
of claMMer.

sOUND
of IMPloDE.

appearance of
whatever(is it BEAUTY orIS it DEATH?)

E Y E
( I )

doNOT
c AIR.

no, EYE/I
(those wonderful eyes inside)
do not care
(they will explode)
no, I
(and leave nothing)
am only air
(but AIR)

wonderful
lovely
ecstatic
reMORSE (code)

disAPPEAR/APPEAR/DISSOLVE/RESOLVE/IMPLODE/EXPLODE/DESTROY/CREATE

DESTROY/CREATE/DESTROY/CREATE/DESTROY/CREATE/DESTROY/CREATE/DESTROY/CREATE/

[ END OF FILE DENY DENY WHERE DO YOU RUN TO WHERE DO YOU HIDE? ]

deNY deNY deNY
why  whI  why?

{{ END OF FILE, DENY DENY, WHERE DO YOU RESOLVE, WHY DO YOU LIE? }}

[ EOF ]

(reSTART >> DESTROY)
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Comments: 2

Dirty-Paint [2007-03-08 02:25:36 +0000 UTC]

very nice; I'm not too sure about the meaning...I generally have some idea as to what a poem means, but I'm drawing up blanks right now. I might be tired :B .

Also, it's nice seeing a more experimental/deep poem on dA. I'm getting a bit tired of "LIFE IS PAAAAIN" poems.

Good job

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RAWR-im-Thunder [2007-03-08 00:14:57 +0000 UTC]

i really like it. i had fun reading it i like the way its set up. cool!

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