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I fell to the ground and layed as still a I could while letting my body regain the oxygen I lost during my twelve mile run. After about fifteen minutes of heavy breathing I sat myself back up and headed down to the pond that was less that a mile away. Once I arrived at the pond I just jumped right in allowing the cold water to cool my over heated body. "You should not do that Tenchi youll send your body into shock dont you know? I well of course you know youve dont that many times befor;no you havent not even once!" I heard the voice of Jinx her frantice way of speaking giving me a new headach. Her way of speaking was odd indeed allways sounding as if you have to choose the reply that if true of salve the entire riddle that is her way of speaking. "I am not going to go into shock."
I spoke calmly to Jinx trying not to ignite one of her riddle-fits as I like to call them. "Yes you are; no your not dear Tenchi your body is much to far ahead! I must be confuseing you but your much to smart for I!" I let out an agrivated sigh. "Jinx...which one of you took over my body and attacked Fang?" I spoke in a calm and slow maner trying not to excite Jinx any further. "Fang?! Who is Fang?! I know not of a Fang other that the one that latched itself onto your ear! A boy with fangs was dominateing you! I do not like that not in the least!" I took a deep breath. "The boy who was...dominateing me was Fang." I could feel Jinx's mischeifus smile spread in my mind. "Oh! That boy was Fang! I delt with him! Gave him a terrible beating! I gentle beating! Such a crude nice boy he was!" There was no doubt in my mind that Fang had started the fight with Jinx. "Did you start the fight?" I had to ask as to not agrivate Jinx's reasoning. "No not I Tenchi! I simply tryed to speak with the boy! He thought I was you! Thought you were toying with his mind by speaking the way I speak! But it was not you it was I! He threw the first blow! I acted in defence and is own punch turned against him!"
My thought's were correct, I pulled myself out of the pond and went straight back to my campsite. "I guess that I have to explain myself to Fang tomorow." I sighed to my self as I stared a fire, winter was neering and I needed to lite the fire more often and keep it going every night...if I wasnted to survive this years winter. I streached out on the bed and let myself fall asleep, I would need the energy to deal with tomorows crap.
Two hours after I fell asleep a noise from the other side of the trees woke me up. I sat up and squinted haveing trouble seeing for some odd reason. I wiped sweat off of my eye lids and looked at my hand. Not sweat, blood I fell asleep facing the fire and now my eyes were burned. "Who's there!" I half yelled half whimpered. Whith my eyes ijured I would not be able to react to any projectile atacks. Four people steped out from behind the bushes, all of them wearing masked and outfites that covered every inch of there skin...
(I have changed the point of veiw from Tenchi's to Shingaku)
I steped out from behind the bushes to see Tenchi, her eyes burned and she was shakeing slightly. "Who are you?!" I heard her ask to knowone imparticular. My elder brother Tobi answered her reply. "Why were just a group of F.B.I agents out looking for escaped criminals. No need to be alarmed were just passing through." (Why is he only serious when he or I is in potential danger of being attacked?) "Dont bother comeing through here! The only person living out here is me! I would like to go back to sleep so please just go away." Tenchi's sudden change in tone made me feel a little unsetled. "Are you pregnat or something?!" I heard Joe yell at Tenchi, who sat up straight at his little outburst. "On the contraire, I just dont wana have to kick you asses so hard that you wont be able to sit for a month." Tenchi spat back playfully, she was trying to piss Joe off.
Out of the corner of my eye I could see Arora, Joe's sister rech for her swoard. "What makes you think that you can talk to us like that?!" Joe raised his right hand to stop Arora from fighting, Joe pulled out his sword and walked up to the fire that was burning just across from Tenchi. "Whats wrong with your eyes wolf?" Joe asked Tenchi who gave an imediate reply. "I fell asleep faceing the fire." Joe nodded and placed the end of his sword into the hot fire. "Well then..." Joe began and I heard Tobi yell "Joe! Dont you dare!" right befor Joe flew the hot embers of fire right at Tenchi's face.

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I fell to the ground and layed as still a I could while letting my body regain the oxygen I lost during my twelve mile run. After about fifteen minutes of heavy breathing I sat myself back up and headed down to the pond that was less that a mile away. Once I arrived at the pond I just jumped right in allowing the cold water to cool my over heated body. "You should not do that Tenchi youll send your body into shock dont you know? I well of course you know youve dont that many times befor;no you havent not even once!" I heard the voice of Jinx her frantice way of speaking giving me a new headach. Her way of speaking was odd indeed allways sounding as if you have to choose the reply that if true of salve the entire riddle that is her way of speaking. "I am not going to go into shock."
I spoke calmly to Jinx trying not to ignite one of her riddle-fits as I like to call them. "Yes you are; no your not dear Tenchi your body is much to far ahead! I must be confuseing you but your much to smart for I!" I let out an agrivated sigh. "Jinx...which one of you took over my body and attacked Fang?" I spoke in a calm and slow maner trying not to excite Jinx any further. "Fang?! Who is Fang?! I know not of a Fang other that the one that latched itself onto your ear! A boy with fangs was dominateing you! I do not like that not in the least!" I took a deep breath. "The boy who was...dominateing me was Fang." I could feel Jinx's mischeifus smile spread in my mind. "Oh! That boy was Fang! I delt with him! Gave him a terrible beating! I gentle beating! Such a crude nice boy he was!" There was no doubt in my mind that Fang had started the fight with Jinx. "Did you start the fight?" I had to ask as to not agrivate Jinx's reasoning. "No not I Tenchi! I simply tryed to speak with the boy! He thought I was you! Thought you were toying with his mind by speaking the way I speak! But it was not you it was I! He threw the first blow! I acted in defence and is own punch turned against him!"
My thought's were correct, I pulled myself out of the pond and went straight back to my campsite. "I guess that I have to explain myself to Fang tomorow." I sighed to my self as I stared a fire, winter was neering and I needed to lite the fire more often and keep it going every night...if I wasnted to survive this years winter. I streached out on the bed and let myself fall asleep, I would need the energy to deal with tomorows crap.
Two hours after I fell asleep a noise from the other side of the trees woke me up. I sat up and squinted haveing trouble seeing for some odd reason. I wiped sweat off of my eye lids and looked at my hand. Not sweat, blood I fell asleep facing the fire and now my eyes were burned. "Who's there!" I half yelled half whimpered. Whith my eyes ijured I would not be able to react to any projectile atacks. Four people steped out from behind the bushes, all of them wearing masked and outfites that covered every inch of there skin...
(I have changed the point of veiw from Tenchi's to Shingaku)
I steped out from behind the bushes to see Tenchi, her eyes burned and she was shakeing slightly. "Who are you?!" I heard her ask to knowone imparticular. My elder brother Tobi answered her reply. "Why were just a group of F.B.I agents out looking for escaped criminals. No need to be alarmed were just passing through." (Why is he only serious when he or I is in potential danger of being attacked?) "Dont bother comeing through here! The only person living out here is me! I would like to go back to sleep so please just go away." Tenchi's sudden change in tone made me feel a little unsetled. "Are you pregnat or something?!" I heard Joe yell at Tenchi, who sat up straight at his little outburst. "On the contraire, I just dont wana have to kick you asses so hard that you wont be able to sit for a month." Tenchi spat back playfully, she was trying to piss Joe off.
Out of the corner of my eye I could see Arora, Joe's sister rech for her swoard. "What makes you think that you can talk to us like that?!" Joe raised his right hand to stop Arora from fighting, Joe pulled out his sword and walked up to the fire that was burning just across from Tenchi. "Whats wrong with your eyes wolf?" Joe asked Tenchi who gave an imediate reply. "I fell asleep faceing the fire." Joe nodded and placed the end of his sword into the hot fire. "Well then..." Joe began and I heard Tobi yell "Joe! Dont you dare!" right befor Joe flew the hot embers of fire right at Tenchi's face.