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Grr, I hate the shading on this.. but here's the story behind it.

Whitespot (the grey one) looked up and froze. Copperstar (the ginger one witht the star, and i like th star on a leader!) looked up into the new moon, and her copper eyes opened wide. It was Brokenshadow! (the snarling cat in the moon) With the scar, the scar Copperstar, as a young warrior by the name of Coppertail, had put there herself when she had killed the she-cat. Brokenshadow had gone mad under the late Brokenstar's influence. Whitespot kept tensing, as if to run, but was too frightened to move. The shadow cat of the moon kept snarling, and Copperstar snarled back. Nightstorm (the black tabby next to Copper), her faithful deputy, trembled some, but held her ground. Eyes were popping out of the shadows where the dens were. Gasps and terrified mews sounded out. The fear of her clan only made Copperstar snarl harder at the moon. It slowly faded until only two pale spots of green remained. Whitespot rushed into his den, tail between his legs. () Copperstar looked at the new moon, but nothing else happened. A sudden wind made her stagger sideways. There! On the rock! A starry white she-cat with mint green eyes, and silver stripes. "Copperstar, beware, what is left of the Dark Forest is rising, your medicine cat friend can sense it. Protect your clan, Copperstar, Copperstar, Copperstar," the echo of Copperstar's name faded into the night, and she gazed where the cat had been. "Silverstripe, mother," whispered Copperstar, a single tear dropping onto the rock. Nightstorm leaped up beside her kit-hood and beyond friend and brushed pelts with her. Copperstar allowed herself to be guided to her den, where she lay there on the moss, deep in thought.

You people like? Be picky, please! (about the writing, not the pic) I need to know if my writing's any better.. seriously.

Description
Grr, I hate the shading on this.. but here's the story behind it.

Whitespot (the grey one) looked up and froze. Copperstar (the ginger one witht the star, and i like th star on a leader!) looked up into the new moon, and her copper eyes opened wide. It was Brokenshadow! (the snarling cat in the moon) With the scar, the scar Copperstar, as a young warrior by the name of Coppertail, had put there herself when she had killed the she-cat. Brokenshadow had gone mad under the late Brokenstar's influence. Whitespot kept tensing, as if to run, but was too frightened to move. The shadow cat of the moon kept snarling, and Copperstar snarled back. Nightstorm (the black tabby next to Copper), her faithful deputy, trembled some, but held her ground. Eyes were popping out of the shadows where the dens were. Gasps and terrified mews sounded out. The fear of her clan only made Copperstar snarl harder at the moon. It slowly faded until only two pale spots of green remained. Whitespot rushed into his den, tail between his legs. () Copperstar looked at the new moon, but nothing else happened. A sudden wind made her stagger sideways. There! On the rock! A starry white she-cat with mint green eyes, and silver stripes. "Copperstar, beware, what is left of the Dark Forest is rising, your medicine cat friend can sense it. Protect your clan, Copperstar, Copperstar, Copperstar," the echo of Copperstar's name faded into the night, and she gazed where the cat had been. "Silverstripe, mother," whispered Copperstar, a single tear dropping onto the rock. Nightstorm leaped up beside her kit-hood and beyond friend and brushed pelts with her. Copperstar allowed herself to be guided to her den, where she lay there on the moss, deep in thought.

You people like? Be picky, please! (about the writing, not the pic) I need to know if my writing's any better.. seriously.