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TorenoWorks — The Hallway Guardian

Published: 2011-05-07 20:06:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 2843; Favourites: 77; Downloads: 0
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Description Based on an actual nightmare I had not long ago.
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So there's this creepy long ass hallway, too dark to really see anything...you can hear someone whispering at the distance, it sounds like prayers in a different language ...once your eyes start to adjust to the darkness, you notice something written all over the walls "Walk, don't run" but what does it mean?... when suddenly this vicious looking creature approaches you crawling , twitching and breathing heavily ...it's movements are painful to watch...You start running, ignoring the advice all over the walls...you don't wanna look back, you just want to get away from there, but the hallway it's too long and dark... and the creature is way faster that it looks, the praying sound gets louder each time, followed by the growling of the beast, which almost sounds human...that sound is the last thing you'll ever hear.

YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE RUN
YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE RUN
YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE RUN
YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE RUN
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wow...what the hell is wrong with me?...

imaginary soundtrack:
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it this considered as..gore? ._. mmh, idk... I'm sure my watchers are mature enough to see crazy shit..
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Comments: 131

TorenoWorks In reply to ??? [2011-05-08 00:18:23 +0000 UTC]

"ARE NOT GOING TO BE IN..." i meant >_< sorry

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SiroOni In reply to TorenoWorks [2011-05-08 00:26:02 +0000 UTC]

XD

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TorenoWorks In reply to SiroOni [2011-05-08 00:35:27 +0000 UTC]

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SiroOni In reply to TorenoWorks [2011-05-08 00:37:41 +0000 UTC]

XD poor megaman

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Sniper-Rin In reply to ??? [2011-05-07 21:18:12 +0000 UTC]

Wow that must've been some reaaaally scary dream.
Haha I usually blame playing too much Silent Hill or something when I get dreams like this.
I really like the concept of it such as the hallway and the advice on the walls as well as the monster's name.
Really cool man.

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TorenoWorks In reply to Sniper-Rin [2011-05-07 22:24:37 +0000 UTC]

thanks a lot, and yeah... I dream all kind of crazy stuff when I play horror games too XD

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Bichinhosdanet7 [2011-05-07 20:32:07 +0000 UTC]

my goooosh, I had a nightmare like this one time, but intead of a monster, it was a little girl covered in blood with an oxygen mask on her face lol
very creepy, also like how you expressed so well in the drawing

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TorenoWorks In reply to Bichinhosdanet7 [2011-05-07 20:38:34 +0000 UTC]

omg .___. you should try drawing that O_o sounds creepily awesome
and thank you~

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Bichinhosdanet7 In reply to TorenoWorks [2011-05-07 21:10:38 +0000 UTC]

oh, now that I think about it... I should try it :0 lolol I will, eventually
you're welcome \o

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RACROX [2011-05-07 20:13:22 +0000 UTC]

I think I just shat my pants...

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TorenoWorks In reply to RACROX [2011-05-07 20:16:20 +0000 UTC]

lol it wasn't easy to go back to sleep that night

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RACROX In reply to TorenoWorks [2011-05-07 20:21:09 +0000 UTC]

I can see why!

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FireCrystal139 In reply to ??? [2011-05-07 20:11:49 +0000 UTC]

Omg, you have a jacked up mind [No offense, I also have a jacked up mind c: ]. The monster is, interesting. I see the human part of it too.

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TorenoWorks In reply to FireCrystal139 [2011-05-07 20:21:17 +0000 UTC]

hahaha no offense taken, I'm completely aware of my ..."peculiar imagination"... too bad I can't completely represent how it looked and sounded in my dream, but it was pretty much like this

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FireCrystal139 In reply to TorenoWorks [2011-05-07 20:23:59 +0000 UTC]

Lol,And that's fine, at least you gave the main idea about the dream. and it reminds me of a wierd dream I had a few years ago. Wierd enough, I remember how it looked, sounded, and everything.


Must go draw it :u

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TorenoWorks In reply to FireCrystal139 [2011-05-07 20:25:27 +0000 UTC]

I'm looking forward to it

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FireCrystal139 In reply to TorenoWorks [2011-05-07 20:26:30 +0000 UTC]

^^ Want to hear what it was about?

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TorenoWorks In reply to FireCrystal139 [2011-05-07 20:30:48 +0000 UTC]

sure thing, but I wouldn't mind waiting for the picture ^^ I wanna be surprised

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FireCrystal139 In reply to TorenoWorks [2011-05-07 20:39:15 +0000 UTC]

Ok, so, I was walking in some kind of place. A wierd place, with a desert like appearence. But, the path was made of think grass. Which confused me greatly. But, I had this urge to continue walking. Even if I didn't know where I was going. After about a few hourse of endless walking, I was surrounded by stone. But I was outside only a few seconds earlier. Standing, acctually more like floating, in front of me was this demonic creature. With a wolf head, horns on the side of it's head, and a snake like body. The end of the tail stayed in one position. It had a wicked smile, even if it had no lower jaw. It had no eyes, but it was staring at me, like it was waiting. I moved forward, only to scream as I felt something inside of me. I fell to my knees, then something burst out of my stomach, then my chest. When I looked down, there was a hole where my heart was, and out of my stomach, a creature just like the one floating in front of me. It was about the same size too. I didn't know how I was still alive. Then I was surrounded in darkness. And that's when the dream ended.

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HunterX1234567890 In reply to ??? [2011-05-07 20:10:57 +0000 UTC]

wonder what would happen if you walked?

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TorenoWorks In reply to HunterX1234567890 [2011-05-07 20:13:45 +0000 UTC]

perhaps walking away slowly was the best way to escape from it

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HunterX1234567890 In reply to TorenoWorks [2011-05-07 20:16:18 +0000 UTC]

yes but... what would the monster do?

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TorenoWorks In reply to HunterX1234567890 [2011-05-07 20:22:42 +0000 UTC]

who knows...maybe if you play by the rules...he won't harm you

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HunterX1234567890 In reply to TorenoWorks [2011-05-07 21:02:46 +0000 UTC]

maybe...

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HunterX1234567890 In reply to ??? [2011-05-07 20:10:09 +0000 UTC]

sounds so creepy
but... it may mean something...

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TorenoWorks In reply to HunterX1234567890 [2011-05-07 20:12:10 +0000 UTC]

most likely...but I'm not sure what could it be

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HunterX1234567890 In reply to TorenoWorks [2011-05-07 20:16:20 +0000 UTC]

hmmmm...

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lorxene [2011-05-07 20:07:41 +0000 UTC]

wow.....That's so awesomely creepy should be in like silent hill

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TorenoWorks In reply to lorxene [2011-05-07 20:09:27 +0000 UTC]

haha, thank you C: but it'll be enough for me if it gets featured in any silent hill group XD

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lorxene In reply to TorenoWorks [2011-05-07 20:11:36 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, That would be awesome...=u= You're welcome

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