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This is a later version of Emline (2.0) She is also not one of my characters, but a one of the members of FOTDC. I'm not done with her yet, but I am looking for some critique on what to do as there are some things I know that is wrong, but what it is I can't pin point. Any suggestions will be welcomed. I used a 2B pencile and a blending stick.
Emline is an Elf from the East, who was cursed. The curse caused her to loose her memory, but gives her the ability to be able to transform into a bird. She joins the FOTDC in their stay at Gondor. Some time later she flies off, only to be seeing later. In which she had become a "show girl". She soon learns what has happened to her friends and meets with Phalin to see what she can do.

Description
This is a later version of Emline (2.0) She is also not one of my characters, but a one of the members of FOTDC. I'm not done with her yet, but I am looking for some critique on what to do as there are some things I know that is wrong, but what it is I can't pin point. Any suggestions will be welcomed. I used a 2B pencile and a blending stick.
Emline is an Elf from the East, who was cursed. The curse caused her to loose her memory, but gives her the ability to be able to transform into a bird. She joins the FOTDC in their stay at Gondor. Some time later she flies off, only to be seeing later. In which she had become a "show girl". She soon learns what has happened to her friends and meets with Phalin to see what she can do.