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Published: 2003-09-06 22:48:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 64; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 20
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Description whats with this delema?
i cannot see.
all these people staring
could it be me?
no its someone else
waching the stage
im someplace else.
im waching another friend
stand in the spotlight
im sitting on the bleacher
cause im not too bright.
its nice for them as you can see
but what about the little people
what about me?
i know its selfish to think of myself
but im always thinking of others
of their safety and health.
i want them to be happy i want them to be free
but what about the little people?
what about me?
maybe if i was pretty
was gracefull with good looks
but no not me
my nose is in some book.
a book made for school
i wouldent read not me.
so what about the little people?
what about me?
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Comments: 1

Celeserenity [2004-06-17 05:45:51 +0000 UTC]

Very clever little piece, i like the rhyming pattern, and the repetition of 'so waht about the little people, what about me?' is very appropriately placed and works well.
Well done!

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