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vavacung — Crazy Future Part 14

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Published: 2014-09-19 14:36:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 89406; Favourites: 664; Downloads: 278
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Description "Come back From the dead..."

Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story.

Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy at times.

Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" but in the future and more crazy. *You don't need to read  "To Love God - To Love Mortal" to understand this story.*

Warning : This is a flashback. If you confused about chronology of this story, You can watch this timeline to help you => sta.sh/01d7zyg26tnn

English Editor : dracoblair.deviantart.com/
Second English Editor : scarletandlunarcool.deviantart…

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Comments: 222

sandkitten16 In reply to ??? [2014-09-23 02:10:19 +0000 UTC]

not really, it is pretty easy to understand o-o i have been reading some of the comments, i don't watch the series but when i looked up the nightmare rarity thing i understood it allot easier....i don't understand what is confusing about it tbh

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Eyeless-jack10 [2014-09-22 22:31:11 +0000 UTC]

I.....can not....WAIT

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h4x0r-1337 [2014-09-22 11:57:17 +0000 UTC]

you know about my thoughts about this comic... I CAN'T WAIT

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SurreallyStressed [2014-09-21 20:15:14 +0000 UTC]

I just love Spike at the last two panels XD

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Srimbalo [2014-09-21 16:59:54 +0000 UTC]

Ok...i am a bit confused right now.

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T-Tylon In reply to Srimbalo [2014-09-22 20:36:55 +0000 UTC]

You don't really know how to establish when and in wich order things takes place, because it's confusing ? Then take a look about the background's color, the one behind the pictures : white is for the present ; black for the past. To be more accurate : page 01 to 07 happens in the present, page 08 start the flashback, page 09 and 10 happens in the past, page 11 makes a step forward in the present as a quick transition, then it goes back to the past with page 12 up until now.

Alright ?

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kabhes In reply to Srimbalo [2014-09-21 18:28:33 +0000 UTC]

the last few pages should explain 

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Nova225 [2014-09-21 02:02:39 +0000 UTC]

''I nearly died 8 second time'' ? ...8 second time ?

I think there's an error there ?

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vavacung In reply to Nova225 [2014-09-21 03:39:55 +0000 UTC]

a....It's "a" not "8"

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Nova225 In reply to vavacung [2014-09-23 23:50:30 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, apparently ? Having to zoom at 200% on it to be sure... says something, I believe. I guess the 'font' makes it weird.
But whatever, that's not exactly ''important'', anyway.

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Poncle In reply to Nova225 [2014-09-21 02:34:08 +0000 UTC]

That says 'a second time', kiddo.

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sandkitten16 In reply to Nova225 [2014-09-21 02:10:29 +0000 UTC]

There is no 8 there o-o

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Kyoshi001 [2014-09-21 01:01:58 +0000 UTC]

spikes wish has been granted *bing* 

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uncommentator In reply to Kyoshi001 [2014-09-21 05:01:41 +0000 UTC]

*dies*

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Kyoshi001 In reply to uncommentator [2014-09-22 00:08:34 +0000 UTC]

>_> whoosh 

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vadram [2014-09-21 00:52:09 +0000 UTC]

artwork is amazing, but the dialog... at times feels a bit forced. Page 3 was very facepalm-ish especially

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fotland42 [2014-09-20 23:17:00 +0000 UTC]

Clearly they should have put a bell on her grave.

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Otonashikun In reply to fotland42 [2014-09-21 00:45:14 +0000 UTC]

lol I'm pretty sure they would do that back in the day just in case somebody who was supposedly dead was really just passed out from drinking too much.

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fotland42 In reply to Otonashikun [2014-09-21 18:37:09 +0000 UTC]

I think I've heard that's just a myth, but I can't be bothered to actually check.

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uncommentator In reply to Otonashikun [2014-09-21 05:02:03 +0000 UTC]

or in a coma

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AT-Earth-Elemental In reply to ??? [2014-09-20 22:34:09 +0000 UTC]

he better say
MY LEG IT HURTS SO MUCH

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SHADOWtheHEJHOG [2014-09-20 22:29:43 +0000 UTC]

Poor Spike, he gets sent airborne more then anypony else. 

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uncommentator In reply to SHADOWtheHEJHOG [2014-09-21 05:02:28 +0000 UTC]

He does have wings now.

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FullmetalRainbowDash [2014-09-20 21:40:49 +0000 UTC]

It just got a teeny tiny bit crazier.

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NicolasDominique [2014-09-20 21:08:37 +0000 UTC]

Wat, waaat.

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Alycat2211 [2014-09-20 21:01:51 +0000 UTC]

How long do you plan to keep this comic going? I want to know because I want to dub it in the future sometime when it's 100% done. It's that amazing!

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zaiali [2014-09-20 20:30:09 +0000 UTC]

BACK IN THE GRAVE ZAHMBIE!!! 

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4you90 [2014-09-20 19:41:10 +0000 UTC]

The dead shall stay in their graves... But rules are meant to be broken, right? ))

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dragonbonehunter In reply to 4you90 [2014-09-21 23:21:24 +0000 UTC]

Not always *scared for life*

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Spectrumancer [2014-09-20 19:10:16 +0000 UTC]

Undead Nightmarity has the best timing.

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ChaosDX1 In reply to ??? [2014-09-20 18:22:44 +0000 UTC]

Hi, Zombie Rarity!

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Hakiromazuto In reply to ??? [2014-09-20 18:20:33 +0000 UTC]

Am I the only one who thinks Twilight's face in panel 5 is really amusing?

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GraphiteHeart-Pony In reply to ??? [2014-09-20 17:31:33 +0000 UTC]

woah! that was fast!

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BBBHuey [2014-09-20 14:25:20 +0000 UTC]

Twilight and Spike: "AAH! ZOMBIE RARITY!!"

Nightmare Rarity: "I'm not a zombie! I'm Nightmare Rarity!"

Twilight and Spike: "AAH! ZOMBIE NIGHTMARE RARITY!!!"

xD

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sphynn [2014-09-20 13:40:54 +0000 UTC]

That was a wonderful twist.  Way to ruin a touching moment, Nightmarity.

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tigreanpony [2014-09-20 13:23:01 +0000 UTC]

Ok so Twilight knows about NMR coming back and she seemed oblivious back at the beginning but I guess that was to give us a surprise here. I guess Spike hinted at the power of Sparity at the beginning. So I guess it makes sense that Twi would know about NMR coming back.

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nightrain233 [2014-09-20 12:37:08 +0000 UTC]

i love it when she said sweet sweet air i dead because of you so do not leave me 

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MugenSeiRyuu [2014-09-20 11:25:21 +0000 UTC]

Zombie Unicorn Attack!

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DarkCrusader28 [2014-09-20 10:34:08 +0000 UTC]

o.o¡

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Thewatcherof89 [2014-09-20 08:45:34 +0000 UTC]

I've noticed that the pages change  colors...
Is beacause they come from different times?

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dalyadam In reply to Thewatcherof89 [2014-09-20 09:53:39 +0000 UTC]

Read the No.4 warning   


Warning : This is a flashback. If you confused about chronology of this story, You can watch this timeline to help you => sta.sh/01d7zyg26tnn

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Thewatcherof89 In reply to dalyadam [2014-09-20 13:53:49 +0000 UTC]

I know that, but that was my friend (brony) asking.
normally, i'm not. I just like the story and the style.
To the artist ps: nice work and stile!

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DatGuySteaLz [2014-09-20 08:04:51 +0000 UTC]

Nope it's just Chuck Testa

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Vashar23 [2014-09-20 07:00:00 +0000 UTC]

Z-Z-Z-ZOMBIE NIGHTMARE PONY!!!

quick Twili, shoot her in the head!

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DaBurd In reply to ??? [2014-09-20 06:47:07 +0000 UTC]

poor spike xD

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HearCrush In reply to ??? [2014-09-20 06:42:19 +0000 UTC]

O.o 

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PrincessCrystalSnow [2014-09-20 05:57:56 +0000 UTC]

Go & find spike in the last panel. Anyone saw it before seeing this comment?

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uncommentator [2014-09-20 05:47:23 +0000 UTC]

Really sad cause loved one dead.
HOLY F**K ZOMBIE NIGHTMARE RARITY!

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darkguys [2014-09-20 04:51:52 +0000 UTC]

Well, that a nice entrance for coming back to life. Note to myself, never get on a coffin area, who know what might happen XD.

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Robotic-Turtle [2014-09-20 04:45:36 +0000 UTC]

Air will never be out of style!

I sort of know how Spike feels. My kitty-cat (my "son") went missing in August, BUT. But he lived, and he's home now. I cried so hard that first week. I was inconcolable until I knew he was alive... It's not exactly the same as a lover, but the bond is just as strong!

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