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"Light it up,"
# Statistics
Favourites: 228; Deviations: 466; Watchers: 23
Watching: 56; Pageviews: 10216; Comments Made: 1449; Friends: 56
# Comments
Comments: 161
Don't mention it man, I love your work.
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Dude just read through a good amount of your stuff, easy to read and get hooked on always and interesting thought, best of luck.
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Thanks man, and luck for you too.
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No problem man, you deserve them.
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Don't mention it, =] I'm still going around your gallery so expect more, you're very talented
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:] thanks. feedback is always much appreciated!
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You are most certainly welcome, for for you; it is deserved.
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Woah O.O That was officially the coolest thanks I've ever gotten
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Hello, just to let you know, I'm trying to fave Winter Solstice Bookend, but dA is not cooperating!
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Ah, well it's the though that counts, it shows up as collected in my inbox, but thank you either way. Oriental is normally not my style, but Charrlie convinced me to give it a go. =]
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idid manage to get the poem faved in the end, mostly because I hate being bested by some programmer's sloppy coding!!
I'll make some time to viait your page. Any friend of charrlie's...!
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Perseverance is one of the most admirable human traits.
Thank you; as will I visit your page as well. Any friend of Charrlie's indeed ^.^.
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thanks for the fav Abstract-Freezy, i knew i could count on you.
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Not just I think you're awesome Jack, but because the writing is pretty damn nice as well =]
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Would you write a sedoka with me? The format is 5-7-7-5-7-7, but we definitely do NOT have to be exact. I figured you could write half, i could write half.
Please? xD ^^
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tada
White, the pure cold white
It's coming in the morning
There, it's coming in the night
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Glow, the glow outlines
All the trees and towers of man
On the streets and in the wilds
What do you think of that?
Separately, they are called katuata, and together, they create a sedoka; a form of two separate parts capable of standing alone, but more profound together.
"White, the pure cold white
It's coming in the morning
There, it's coming in the night
Glow, the glow outlines
All the trees and towers of man
On the streets and in the wilds"
What should we call it?
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"The Winter Solstice Bookend?"
"Snow Shades"
or
"2009 Winter Sepulcher"
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Definitely The Winter Solstice Bookend.
Okay, I personally think we should both post it...then in the author's comments, we say "Okay, this sedoka is a collaboration with ____ who is _____ and you should go comment and +fav for them, too!"
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thanks for the 
i was so ecstatic to realize i got a feature.
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I've yet to see this piece by you before, and I think it's pretty stunning.
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Bwahaha, I found you. (But I cheated and asked Jena.)
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Doesn't matter, I suppose, 'cause now I can stalk you and your poetry.
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Alas', dillema.
I can stalk you too
And I'm better at it
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*runs around in circles and slams into the wall*
Cameo: ...? *walks away*
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You don't recognize me, do you? It's Autumn :3
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OH MY GOD!
AUTUMN!
YES!
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Har har. XD
I just made this the other day because I was sick of telling people I didn't have one when they asked. I just convinced Tori to join, too.
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Gosh, does everyone at school have one of these? First Hallie, then Nellie, and now you! lol
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I came before Nell did,
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You are most certainly welcome, :]
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Always welcome, ^.^
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Of course it is. You don't HAVE to share your work, so it is an honor to be able to enjoy it. ^_^
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Alright, well in that case... enjoy it proudly, =]
But is really is my enjoyment to post it for you,
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