TriangularTriforces In reply to darkwarriorcursehero [2015-07-23 22:36:42 +0000 UTC]

I shortened Agent-A to AA for sake of time, I don't mean to do it indefinitely.


AA has to fight through about 50 of Marlow's men. Say he has to go through most of a building to do so. I don't have any specifics of the actual fight, but afterwards maybe he'll walk in on Marlow abusing Violet, both physically and emotionally. Marlow was so confident that AA wouldn't be able to make it through his men that he went about his day as normal.
   Violet locks eyes with AA and says something like "please, help me" before passing out due to the pain/exhaustion or something. This causes AA to become even more angered at James and he kills him. Maybe a little rivalry dialog between the two of them, with JM saying that he doesn't regret any of it. 
   No matter what, I'm thinking that Marlow should go down big. Say he has a samurai sword hanging on his wall as decoration, and AA quickly grabs it and stabs/slashes him with it. Think of the sword possibilities:

Stab- between the eyes, in the chest, through the stomach, from the top of his head towards the ground, through the neck, from the chin up through the top of his head.. 

Slash- slit throat, cut him multiple places until he bleeds out, cut off appendages...

There's a lot of options if we take it in that direction. We could also go more simple, shooting JM between the eyes to his brain. Maybe AA could shoot him in the chest and in his final moments James Marlow says something like "you bastard" and then he just dies. What were you thinking, simple death or extravagant? Are there any specific sequences or scenes we need to figure out down to a finite point?

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darkwarriorcursehero In reply to TriangularTriforces [2015-08-18 00:43:52 +0000 UTC]

And I am not looking forward to it because last year was complete and total nightmare

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darkwarriorcursehero In reply to TriangularTriforces [2015-08-15 19:24:54 +0000 UTC]

I get what you mean next week I'm going back to school

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TriangularTriforces In reply to darkwarriorcursehero [2015-08-18 00:38:45 +0000 UTC]

Yea

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darkwarriorcursehero In reply to TriangularTriforces [2015-08-11 21:13:43 +0000 UTC]

Hello friend^^

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TriangularTriforces In reply to darkwarriorcursehero [2015-08-12 02:09:26 +0000 UTC]

Hey! Sorry, I've been sick and going through some relationship troubles all at the same time.

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darkwarriorcursehero In reply to TriangularTriforces [2015-08-12 02:57:05 +0000 UTC]

Oh I'm sorry to hear that are you going to be OK?

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TriangularTriforces In reply to darkwarriorcursehero [2015-08-12 23:53:09 +0000 UTC]

Yea, it was just a bug.

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darkwarriorcursehero In reply to TriangularTriforces [2015-08-13 00:19:40 +0000 UTC]

Well I'm glad to know that you're OK

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TriangularTriforces In reply to darkwarriorcursehero [2015-08-15 18:02:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I've also now started school, so it will be harder for me to find time to get online. I took all Honors classes, so I'll be getting s lot of homework.

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darkwarriorcursehero In reply to TriangularTriforces [2015-08-05 20:45:17 +0000 UTC]

Totally have him have a more detective side I designed AA to be very intelligent so it's very important that we have show some detective skills

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TriangularTriforces In reply to darkwarriorcursehero [2015-08-05 21:22:01 +0000 UTC]

True.

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darkwarriorcursehero In reply to TriangularTriforces [2015-08-05 21:29:18 +0000 UTC]

Yep even though he's not really a detective really he's actually a manager of electronic store it's the perfect cover up for him

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darkwarriorcursehero In reply to TriangularTriforces [2015-08-03 01:35:43 +0000 UTC]

Hey I was just wanting to talk to you if you're there

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TriangularTriforces In reply to darkwarriorcursehero [2015-08-03 16:37:01 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, I've been really busy the last few days. What are you wanting to talk about?

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darkwarriorcursehero In reply to TriangularTriforces [2015-08-03 16:39:23 +0000 UTC]

It's all right I understand I just wanted to know if you wanted to talk about the plot some more if you're interested?

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TriangularTriforces In reply to darkwarriorcursehero [2015-08-03 21:53:27 +0000 UTC]

I am interested

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darkwarriorcursehero In reply to TriangularTriforces [2015-08-03 22:02:09 +0000 UTC]

I was thinking maybe we could add a little bit of a detective element to the plot like AA needs a way to find JM right?

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TriangularTriforces In reply to darkwarriorcursehero [2015-08-05 20:32:48 +0000 UTC]

That would be great, do we want him to have more of a detective side or maybe add another character who would be a detective?

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darkwarriorcursehero In reply to TriangularTriforces [2015-08-05 21:10:20 +0000 UTC]

We want him to have more of a detective side to show off more of his intelligent mind

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darkwarriorcursehero In reply to TriangularTriforces [2015-07-24 01:07:17 +0000 UTC]

All of those seem like a good idea so I'm thinking maybe a little bit of all of the mixed into one where JM is pleading for his life and saying he'll go anywhere if AA spares him AA says this how about you go to hell

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TriangularTriforces In reply to darkwarriorcursehero [2015-07-24 16:17:05 +0000 UTC]

I like that.

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darkwarriorcursehero In reply to TriangularTriforces [2015-07-27 16:15:23 +0000 UTC]

All right here's what I got how about AA twist JM's left arm and shoot off right hand then AAA slams JM space through a window Pools him out than slams him on the ground suits him in the knees and says go to hell

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TriangularTriforces In reply to darkwarriorcursehero [2015-07-27 21:02:50 +0000 UTC]

YAAAAAS! I love it. After that, do we leave him to die or kill him?


--If Violet passes out for some reason during this sequence, we could have AA pick her up and carry her out and leave it simple like that. If she is still conscious, then he could be repeatedly telling her "it's going to be alright. Nobody can hurt you now, I won't let them" and stuff like that the entire way out of the building. He'd have to make sure that her eyes are shielded so she doesn't see all of the dead men though.

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darkwarriorcursehero In reply to TriangularTriforces [2015-07-27 21:07:24 +0000 UTC]

Totally kill him

Both ideas sound really good

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darkwarriorcursehero In reply to TriangularTriforces [2015-07-24 17:32:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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darkwarriorcursehero In reply to TriangularTriforces [2015-07-24 01:00:43 +0000 UTC]

But the plot is still awesome I love it so good

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darkwarriorcursehero In reply to TriangularTriforces [2015-07-23 22:56:06 +0000 UTC]

That's a good plot a course JM is only going to be there just to be an example AA already has a major arrival and his name is Skull-Face

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TriangularTriforces In reply to darkwarriorcursehero [2015-07-22 23:10:36 +0000 UTC]

Hey

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darkwarriorcursehero In reply to TriangularTriforces [2015-07-23 17:00:27 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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TriangularTriforces In reply to darkwarriorcursehero [2015-07-23 17:06:12 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I'll keep all this in mind. Do you want me to write out the fight scene so we'd have a short little story to base that part of the comic off of?

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darkwarriorcursehero In reply to TriangularTriforces [2015-07-23 17:10:16 +0000 UTC]

As long is the flight scene

listen to a song called from shadows that's what gave me the idea for the plot

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TriangularTriforces In reply to darkwarriorcursehero [2015-07-23 17:13:10 +0000 UTC]

RWBY Theme: From Shadows Extended (RoosterTeeth) -Youtube ?

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darkwarriorcursehero In reply to TriangularTriforces [2015-07-23 17:16:52 +0000 UTC]

That very song you seen the show to you?

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TriangularTriforces In reply to darkwarriorcursehero [2015-07-23 17:19:09 +0000 UTC]

I haven't, I've been meaning to start it for a while though. I'm trying to finish up/catch up with all the other shows I've started though.

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darkwarriorcursehero In reply to TriangularTriforces [2015-07-23 17:22:00 +0000 UTC]

RWBY is a really awesome show awesome songs awesome characters just about everything about is awesome and the characters are characters I can kind of relate with I hope you do get the chance to watch it

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TriangularTriforces In reply to darkwarriorcursehero [2015-07-23 17:22:50 +0000 UTC]

Me too

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darkwarriorcursehero In reply to TriangularTriforces [2015-07-23 17:25:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for agreeing to help us with the plot we really appreciate it

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TriangularTriforces In reply to darkwarriorcursehero [2015-07-23 17:26:36 +0000 UTC]

Of course, this will be a lot of fun!

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darkwarriorcursehero In reply to TriangularTriforces [2015-07-23 17:31:04 +0000 UTC]

Yep ^^ if there's anything you don't understand about the plot come talk to me about

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TriangularTriforces In reply to darkwarriorcursehero [2015-07-23 17:32:54 +0000 UTC]

K, I'll try and get some stuff done for the final battle. I'll message you with any ideas I have.

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darkwarriorcursehero In reply to TriangularTriforces [2015-07-23 17:35:53 +0000 UTC]

OK then ^^

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darkwarriorcursehero In reply to TriangularTriforces [2015-07-22 23:11:55 +0000 UTC]

Ready to hear The plot for the dark vigilante?

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TriangularTriforces In reply to darkwarriorcursehero [2015-07-22 23:55:00 +0000 UTC]

Of course!

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darkwarriorcursehero In reply to TriangularTriforces [2015-07-23 02:11:51 +0000 UTC]

OK good anyway I was hoping maybe you could help with the details of the plot

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TriangularTriforces In reply to darkwarriorcursehero [2015-07-23 16:41:23 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I will get to thinking. Any specifics that you need figured out?

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darkwarriorcursehero In reply to TriangularTriforces [2015-07-23 00:07:39 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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