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Favourites: 1134; Deviations: 33; Watchers: 21
Watching: 42; Pageviews: 4657; Comments Made: 307; Friends: 42
# Comments
Comments: 169
lightningresonance In reply to Woormolf [2017-03-01 03:29:43 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! I like the story in your photo!
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lightningresonance In reply to LifeOfSherman [2016-12-13 04:49:28 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome! It was great finding you're poem, I actually got super into thinking how the message applied to my writing! Also, I love the imagery you used!
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lightningresonance In reply to comatose-comet [2016-11-15 01:29:42 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! I always love reading your works!
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lightningresonance In reply to magicinthedark [2016-10-03 02:08:36 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! Thank you for giving one first!
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Gin-Zura [2016-05-31 21:25:23 +0000 UTC]
Hey there, thanks a bunch for the fave, I appreciate it very much!
Reconstructing RowenaMore richer than the Queen herself I see,
Built in bronze of old, molten gilded folds.
I hold the keys to fix you properly,
Death fails as perfection, on you, I mold.
Because you see, now youβre built for me Lovely,
Flawless and fine, your music gears do grind.
No words spoken but steam escapes so comely,
You cast away the dreams of lust in mind.
Brass goggles do hide dark desires well,
And you, blind wife, shed tears in black oil.
Red addiction so strong, the smog inhaled,
Canβt keep me from letting you to spoil.
Love, they wonβt find out what I did to you,
Youβll be safe with me, a love-struck cuckoo.
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lightningresonance In reply to Gin-Zura [2016-06-01 03:52:12 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! I'm still trying to figure out what it's talking about, but the pretty language and word choices attracted me very much so! Good job on it!
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Gin-Zura In reply to lightningresonance [2016-06-01 03:59:28 +0000 UTC]
Do you want a hint? Aw thank you! I'm very glad you liked it!
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lightningresonance In reply to Gin-Zura [2016-06-01 07:44:33 +0000 UTC]
Actually, yes, a hint would be lovely!
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Gin-Zura In reply to lightningresonance [2016-06-01 07:46:53 +0000 UTC]
All right, think about key words and lines used in the sonnet, such as the last two lines. Also, the narrator is referring to his wife. Hope this helps!
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lightningresonance In reply to Gin-Zura [2016-06-01 08:01:18 +0000 UTC]
Okay question. Are either the narrator and their wife not human, or both? Or am I way off the mark? Please bear with me, sometimes I'm slow to get things, haha. = P
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Gin-Zura In reply to lightningresonance [2016-06-01 08:02:57 +0000 UTC]
That's all right lol, you're actually pretty close. The narrator is human, and the wife WAS human, not any more xD
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lightningresonance In reply to Gin-Zura [2016-06-01 08:27:08 +0000 UTC]
WAS human... so... I'm guessing...
He made something, some sort of machine - a clock maybe? Cuz keys and gears and oiling, and steampunk, as your tags say - to remember his wife, but now it's twisted love because now his new "wife" is immortal and made to his whim
Or maybe he actually directly used his wife's body and used it for a machine?Β
Ok real second question, was the narrator the cause of his wife not being human anymore? Did he murder her or... or used her body for this machine...
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Gin-Zura In reply to lightningresonance [2016-06-01 18:07:25 +0000 UTC]
You're correct!
And well, the wife was already dying out of sickness and he become upset and wanted to heal her. He's a inventor/crazed scientist, so he decided to fix her. But she died either way and became a robot, and he became obsessed with making her perfect. So he didn't murder her, but he did use her body
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lightningresonance In reply to Gin-Zura [2016-06-01 19:20:00 +0000 UTC]
Aha, awesome!! I got that sense that there was something dark in there, looks like it took me time to understand it and with lots of help! Thanks for this, I really enjoyed rereading your poem several times over, and especially this little conversation we've had going! This was fun!
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Now I'm wondering though.... Your wife is gone, but even with her body still with you, is it even her anymore? Is it the same love you had? Did you want that same old love? Or something more perfect?Β
Yeah I love dark themes like this, it gets me thinking! =3
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Gin-Zura In reply to lightningresonance [2016-06-01 20:32:21 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! It makes me happy someone enjoyed my poem, and yes, this little conversation was loads of fun! XD
Nope, the narrator's wife is no longer her anymore. More like an obsession sort of love now between the narrator and wife. Just more of something more perfect
Exactly! :3
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lightningresonance In reply to comatose-comet [2016-05-10 05:26:20 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome! So this actually isn't the first time I've favorited something by you, and I'm very happy to say that your style of writing always gets to me in the good way. I absolutely love your style of language, and I always fall super hard for the wording whenever I see your poetry on my dash. So I guess in short, I love your writing.Β
But yeah, great job on "flat-line fever!" I loved the imagery of this one!
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comatose-comet In reply to lightningresonance [2016-05-25 19:01:14 +0000 UTC]
this is an absurdly late reply, but thank you for your kind words, it really means a lot (especially in the middle of my uni finals!) so thank you again
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lightningresonance In reply to LifeOfSherman [2016-05-07 01:44:23 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! It was nice to find a French poem among the many others on my notifications, especially one that was nicely written! Good job on the storytelling part, that was my favorite!
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LifeOfSherman In reply to lightningresonance [2016-05-07 02:25:37 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! It was difficult because it isn't my first language, but I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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lightningresonance In reply to shelleypalmer [2016-04-11 07:57:11 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! I liked the story of it and how you ended it!
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Gin-Zura [2016-04-04 23:06:07 +0000 UTC]
Hey there, thanks for the fave, I really appreciate it
From White to Purple Lilacs in SpringΒ Β I used to think the color white was beautiful,
Where beads of the sea dotted the dress;
Β Β Given for her to twirl along her own musical,
Where her hands meet to love and caress.
Β Β The sky above brings promised warmth and light
Β Β We begin by seeing and bathing in honest white.
Β Β In the midst of the field, a pair of fallen stars whispered,
A song sung for one another, the poet and the muse.
Β Β Their innocence stolen, plucked from the ground, withered;
A trust, a love beginning for two lives to gently fuse.
Β Β The sky above brings promised warmth and light
Β Β We begin by seeing and bathing in honest white.
Β Β And across the descending heavens we take flight;
I see the dulcet bloom of lilacs below in mellifluous colors.
Β Β We go beyond the field, into the woods at night;
I see a summer twilight, one each from dawn and dusk by lovers.
Β Β The sky above brings promise
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lightningresonance In reply to Gin-Zura [2016-04-07 05:11:49 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! I love the language you used in your poem!
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Gin-Zura In reply to lightningresonance [2016-04-07 05:13:13 +0000 UTC]
Aw thank you very much!
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lightningresonance In reply to LadyPleiades [2016-03-03 19:33:20 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! I liked your poem! And thank you for the fave back!
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lightningresonance In reply to comatose-comet [2016-02-11 19:14:08 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! I really love your poetry!
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OneWithTheStars [2016-02-03 01:16:00 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the fave on The Morning After.
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lightningresonance In reply to OneWithTheStars [2016-02-03 06:04:43 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! I really liked your poem, it had me thinking about its underlying meaning for a long while!
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BlueLionEyes [2016-01-31 21:18:12 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the fave! <3 It is much appreciated~
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lightningresonance In reply to BlueLionEyes [2016-02-01 04:42:29 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! Our poem had me thinking about it for a long while after, so you could say I got hooked! Great job!
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T5-Comix-Cartoonz [2015-11-23 11:51:08 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for faving my poem, "Patron Saint of Truth". I'm glad you liked it.
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lightningresonance In reply to T5-Comix-Cartoonz [2015-11-24 04:20:55 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! I really did like your poem!
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lightningresonance In reply to kilkegard [2015-10-29 17:48:49 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! I loved your poem more than I already thought I would! It was wonderful!
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SootheNoo1959 [2015-10-25 22:31:17 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for the fave! Great gallery!
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lightningresonance In reply to SootheNoo1959 [2015-10-27 04:27:07 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! And thank you in return!
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lightningresonance In reply to Liacri [2015-10-25 17:30:19 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! I love your writing and your word usage!
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Liacri In reply to lightningresonance [2015-10-26 21:55:22 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm so glad to hear that you enjoyed it.
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