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Published: 2015-05-24 20:04:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 3550; Favourites: 65; Downloads: 0
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I trace your ink-infused skinwith my wanting fingertips
and I remember the better
days. You were younger
once and I was sweeter
once, and we shared a
prison cell called love.
You are no longer baby-
faced and I have hair down
to my waist, and you smoke
cigarettes and you drink
whiskey because you want to
be a man’s man. You kiss me
sweetly for the fifth year
in a row, even though I
haven’t known what it’s like
to call you mine in four.
I can’t detach myself from
your wanting gaze, the way
you look at me when I shed
my skin. I can’t let go of your
laugh and your blue-green-grey
eyes, the way you smirk and pull
me close to your heat.
There is a tomahawk on your
arm and I trace its black lines
and the softness of your skin,
and I pray that it will not always
be this way.
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Comments: 30
DyingxAngel [2015-08-17 05:52:16 +0000 UTC]
Excellent verses - It shows a man and woman's undying love from the 20th century through present day. The man Clearly has tattoos and some habits that need to be broken. There is something about their relationship that is about to change. If the man knows any better he would do anything for this woman.
~DxA~
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Katt-Velgera [2015-08-08 18:37:25 +0000 UTC]
Wow I really like this, it is emotional and i feel a lot from it. Thank you for sharing
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KorkeyMayy [2015-07-11 19:30:28 +0000 UTC]
This is beautifully well written and I love it!!
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pinelopi-z [2015-07-10 23:13:10 +0000 UTC]
I totally agree with Mrs-Freestar-Bul and Beeinthebottle. I really enjoyed it from the beggining to the end and I love the words you used. Congrats on the well deserved DD!~ ♡
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19seconds In reply to pinelopi-z [2015-07-24 00:22:37 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much, your words mean a lot (:
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dragonhumanform [2015-07-10 15:43:51 +0000 UTC]
This is....... I have no words because of how good it is....... It's actually so good that it gives me memories of someone I use to love until something bad happened...... But this is the best thing I have read. if I could rate this it would be 10/10
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19seconds In reply to dragonhumanform [2015-07-24 00:24:35 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! I'm glad you could relate to it, though I'm sorry if it was a negative memory!
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dragonhumanform In reply to 19seconds [2015-07-24 00:30:37 +0000 UTC]
It was a negative memory but it made me stronger than ever and it helped in the end.
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LoveDoesNotExist [2015-07-10 08:33:10 +0000 UTC]
I like it a lot. Good rhytm and easy to connect to the theme.
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul [2015-07-10 07:09:43 +0000 UTC]
I really love this, so beautifully fragile and honest. very well written as well. Congrats on your DD
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19seconds In reply to Mrs-Freestar-Bul [2015-07-24 00:23:47 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much. (:
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beeswingblue [2015-05-29 01:52:19 +0000 UTC]
The line breaks, especially, are exquisite. Nicely done, all around.
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FridgePoetProject [2015-05-26 03:35:38 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful and haunting, from start to finish. Loved this part in particular:
"You were younger
once and I was sweeter
once, and we shared a
prison cell called love."
Well done!
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19seconds In reply to FridgePoetProject [2015-05-26 15:08:50 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! Your kind words are much appreciated.
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