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Published: 2007-05-19 09:18:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 253; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 24
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Lovesometimes,
as love we are pretend.
like lust made out of loneliness.
it's not like me,
to walk away.
sometimes our love,
becomes decayed.
I loved you most,
my lonely sin.
treasured you more than anything,
but all grown up were not the same.
sometimes i think we've gone insane.
forgive me love
i've lost myself.
tattooed you face,
inside my shell.
laid out a rose upon our grave,
remembered that we died today.
i took the bullet,
from your lips.
and stuck it deep inside my head.
i thought about the things we did,
and the things we'll never do again.
sometimes as love,
we don't ascend.
we just lay stranded here again.
it's not like me,
to walk away.
sometimes our love,
is poorly made
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Comments: 4
4rg1v1n4 In reply to Rouxette [2007-07-24 08:17:37 +0000 UTC]
thanx for tha fav
i read ur "Fallen Angels"
wow,.... its very good
ur very talented
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nazurin [2007-05-19 09:20:59 +0000 UTC]
Beuatiful, nice work, but the wording could do with a little more work, "Stuck" could be replaced with so many prettier words.
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4rg1v1n4 In reply to nazurin [2007-05-20 08:03:05 +0000 UTC]
thats true... now that i think of it... that word is out of place...
thanx for tha comment
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