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Published: 2010-09-11 16:26:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 128; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description September 11, 2010 - Saturday

An Autumn Spring creek
flows endlessly through the woods
as the deer trotted.
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Comments: 5

BrokenMori [2010-09-11 19:00:25 +0000 UTC]

short sweet and to the point lol
but in all seriousness i like it you make autumn sound all pretty

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AdvancedSlacker In reply to BrokenMori [2010-09-11 19:12:13 +0000 UTC]

D thanks. for my first haiku i think i coulda done better. but its ok i guess.

in my opinion, autumn is pretty, with all the leaves falling and stuff :3 but thanks again ;D

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BrokenMori In reply to AdvancedSlacker [2010-09-14 20:30:51 +0000 UTC]

it could have been a little longer..but its better than what i could do. partly cuz im too lazy lol BUT you are talented at writing ;]

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AdvancedSlacker In reply to BrokenMori [2011-01-09 18:17:09 +0000 UTC]

OH! And btw i forgot, thanks for saying i was talented LOL it took me until just now to realize i never thanked you for saying so xD

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AdvancedSlacker In reply to BrokenMori [2010-09-17 01:54:45 +0000 UTC]

A Haiku is, as you know, Japanese poetry. They consist of two parts and it has a non-rhyming scheme. In English, a Haiku translates to 3 lines with a syllable count of 5, 7, 5. English written Haikus can be longer, but most are written in this way.

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