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Published: 2012-05-21 07:55:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 1298; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 42
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HOLY SPIRITS THIS IS MY FIRST ANIMATION EVER AND I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT---
*ahem* Sorry about that. Well, this really IS my first try at animation, and I'm very happy of how it turned out.
EDIT: Added a few more frames at the end. The return kiss was little bit fast, and it must be seen. *wink wink*
| DISCLAIMER | The people featured in this deviation are my original characters. Any resemblance to a real-life person is pure coincidence.
Peter Harrison, Hoshigaki Sayuri (c) me
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Comments: 7
It's amazing, I just think you need an in-between in the last frame, before the kiss moment. The Animation looks great
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WOW! For a first animation, you did REALLY well! It's fairly smooth, and EXTREMELY adorable! <3 What I suggest you do, though, is maybe space out the return kiss at the end. It seems a little too abrupt, and I had to look at it a couple of times to catch it!
Other than that, they are SO adorable, and I really love how you have the frame moving and the sepia color to make it look almost like an old-fashioned lil' motion picture ditty!
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Thanks for the critique! I really appreciate it~!!
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No problemo! Glad to be of help. ^^
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