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Agent505 — An Evening Run 01
Published: 2018-02-15 17:04:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 41434; Favourites: 349; Downloads: 0
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Ladies and gentlemen, my special project. This is two years in the making.This was a commission drawn up the talented and I added the text. Michelle and Shelly have just completed a pleasant jog, and while it's likely they've gone further than they might have intended, they're never too far from home when there's a car in the genetic garage.
Second panel is here: Evening Run 02
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This is amazing.
It's better than Henkei Shojo
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Not familiar with Henkei Shojo, but thanks
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www.youtube.com/watch?v=dLmXnp… watch them all. I dare you.
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Dare accepted. I've actually had dreams of girls drinking gasoline and then turning into cars before; thought I had repressed them.
Interesting. Is it a magna or just individual TF scenes?
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Ah.
Cyborg girls, too, no doubt. Think they'll make it into a full fledged anime/magna?
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Impressive start I like how it builds up and the art work is very well done
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I am very ashamed it had took me too long, but... well, at least I am very happy that you have like it. And thanks for all your patient. Many greetings! I am enyoing the texts to know more about the story, n . n/
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Life happens. It got done, and that's the best part. Thank you again!
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Michelle's wearing purple, so her text is in purple. Shelly's in pink, ditto. Summer's in blue, see left. That's what the colors represent.
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Purple prose is a term describing writing that is overly flowery or ornate. It was a joke.
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Ah. It's not a term I'm familiar with. Guess I'm more familiar with the practice.
Duely noted and thanks for the writing lesson
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Yeah, I just assumed you would know the term. Many new writers are warned against being overly flowery or ornate.
BTW, the text being different colors is fine. I think though that using slightly more drop shadow would make it easier to read against some of the backgrounds.
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Okay - yeah, I thought the white would help but I'll admit I did rush it.
And yes, I have had many teachers warn me about overdoing the flowery language. As a rule, I break it out once in awhile just to smite my poetry teachers.
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