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AgentC-24 — KL: Uh Oh It's Magic Pg 6
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Published: 2010-05-23 17:54:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 2054; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 9
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With the whole comic now sketched and inked, all I have left is this and then one more page to color. It's been a long time coming (spanning 5 months and a graduation), so I appreciate the patience from all of you fine audience-types!
The plans for the next comic are indeed underway. Things are going awry for the high-kicking and not-so-magical gals, and Chelsea comes to the realization that she can't pull the wool over her nephew's eyes as long as his hawk-like mother is around to make her life a judgemental living hell. The only thing left to do is actually listen to her boss for once! How will this simple advice work out for Chelsea and the girls? Will Alison keep that bunnyoutfitplz? Tune into the conclusion this week of "Kickline: Uh Oh, It's Magic!"
Kickline: Uh Oh, It's Magic:
Page 1: [link]
Page 2: [link]
Page 3: [link]
Page 4: [link]
Page 5: [link]
Page 6: [link]
Page 7: [link]
Special thanks to for help on the storyline. Kickline, its characters and the storyline belong to me. So does the artwork.
Comments and suggestions welcome.
Enjoy!
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Comments: 21
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You'd think people would have preferred this one over the original! 
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Aha, wow, that's a different kind of rabbit. But it works perhaps...?
Candy ought to take her act on the road.
Yes, but back to the point, I like the way this is progressing!
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Well, they'd attract a decent sized male audience, that's for sure! 
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'FACEPALM' is finally used as a sound effect! YUSSS!!!
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I coulda swore one of you crazies used it (perhaps just in the chats!), but thanks a lot nonetheless for the eagle eye!
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Oh yus it'a an old fave! Never used it in an actual comical striy-up though!
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Yay! Another page of the comic! The expression are great, as always. I think your coloring sill is getting better and better 
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Thank you very much for that very uplifting comment!
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Great coloring job-I love all of their expressions
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I'd hate to have that kind of gal for an in-law too!
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Sorry if this one bored you, I've tried to make it be entertaining!
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I'm not saying it bored me, but it was more like I thought this would be a double length comic.
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Ohhh, I see!
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....and the truth will always prevail!
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Yeah, more story than I'm used to!
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1. What a great way to start a page with that "Round 3. FIGHT!". Geeks like me thank you
2. YUS! YUS! You used my joke! This is one of those moments that makes me glad to be a parent. ...Ok, I'm not a parent, but still. Thanks for using it.
3. Allison DOES look cute in the bunny suit
4. Oh Goof!
5. I really like how Chelsea, despite all the kicks and giggles and so on, proves herself to be an adult by wanting to admit the truth. Great characterization!
6. It all looks so neat and the coloring is great.
7. Facial expressions and whatnot, awesome
The only thing I noticed is that her sister in law, when she's sitting, her leg looks a wee bit funny. I know you're trying to make her sit with her legs sorta crossed from a front view, but it looks like it's coming out of nowhere. Next time, I might suggest that you try and draw a little bit of the thigh/upper leg to show that the leg came from somewhere. Sorry if I sound like a bitch
Still, it looks great. You've put a lot of effort into this!
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Yay! My comics are comical! 
1. You geeks are welcome!
2. You are the parent comedy! 
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4. One of the rare times Goof gets a good line!
5. She's certainly the second-most mature of the girls. The fits of rage pegs her down a few notches!
6. Aw, thanks! I was worried about the dirtiness of the pic.
7. I loves me some good expressions!
And thanks for the critique too! I agree with the assessment, though I already did the last page and there's another pose like that. I'll have to work on it! 
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You're welcome
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