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Published: 2004-06-08 20:19:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 99; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 13
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Hello again,its me, my darling
the wind you feel at night
I want to tell you
I feel your touch
though we never do
that I cry your tears
and wipe them away
to the stars above.
Looking at the sky at night
I feel your warmth around
you speak so soft
and say so much
too sweet for words,
and kind to me.
Ill gently stroke your face
with each nighttime pass
and slowly drift away.
My darling
I am the wind
and though you dont see,
I am there
I take the form of many things
each to be with you
you long for a smile
to once again feel
Pause....
can you feel that?
the soft feather brush your hand?
Ill sit with you
as I always have
and wrap you in my wings
hold you close to my heart
mi cielo por el noche
My darling
soy los estrellas en el cielo
mis formas estan para ti
tomar alivo siempre
My darling
la vienta
un angel
un estrella
Im there
always
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Comments: 24
Nice poem.
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Nothing wrong with romance
At least not this instance
'Tis part of our lives experience
Our gentle souls' existence.
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I enjoy writing little rhymes. I wouldnt go as far as to call them poetry, but they keep me happy. I'm glad you liked it.
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that was pretty, i liked it
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so preety.... it flows wonderfully, and very nice imagry
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thank you much love!
+Aithne
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hehe no problem 
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Very beautiful, your words have such a great flow to them. I definitely like this side of your writing.
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so you like it when i write happy? hmmm, its kind of hard though, mainly cause i only write what i feel, and most of the time, its not too happy, thats why a lot of my work is so dark. *shrugs* but thank you my dear for your positive comment on my work :smmoch:
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Thats a great poem, very touching and heart felt, the way you cut down the length of lines at the bottom works well.
I translated the spanish through babble fish and its beautiful.
Lucky person to have you write those words,
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thank you very much dear!
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You're welcome.
Whats going on with your avatar?
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what do you mean? i just changed it, is that not allowed?
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No, you need to ask me first, hehe.
Nah its just that i just cant make out if its meant to be something...
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actually, i didnt make it to be anything. its just me messing around on paint. nothing important, though it looks like a rabbit.
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I think it looks like a cartoon mouse that is trying to eat some cheese but is being attacked by orange bees.
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lol, sure! whatever you see, i guess it could be like one of those ink blot tests or something
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The spanish gets me too at the moment..but I'm sure it works just fine..Everything else is wonderfully written!
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hmmmm, well if you want to know, just ask, and i shall tell you. and thank you lots my dear for the lovely comment 
+Aithne
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Hehe..Love that new icon..isn't that like mosaic or something..the dot painting style..
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actually, its just doneon paint, and i used the spray thing, and put orange and purple, then i used ths bucket thing, and filled in some parts with black and thats how it came out. it sort of looks like an animal or something. i really like it, and so thanks!
+Aithne
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Beautiful... as always!
My fave part:
"Ill sit with you
as I always have
and wrap you in my wings
hold you close to my heart"
Nice!
And if the English isn't there already, can you translate the spanish... I dropped it a long time ago! :embarrassed:
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i could, but then what fun would that be? note me and ill tell you, and thank you for liking the poem!
+Aithne
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