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Alulle β soo what's she doing exactly? (animated...sort of)
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Published: 2014-07-29 04:22:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 466; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 1
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guess what happened here.. cause the little lord sure can't.... hahahahaanyway also this is more a test of panels to come in new style. background and more background simplicity and I like it... I like how the backgrounds matches the new style... I forgot the textures and stuff but right now I'm happy with it. I'm getting close
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Si lo viiii?....no te he dicho nadas? sorry!!!! ahhhh se me fue horrible, segΓΊn yo si te habΓa dicho y todoooooooo!! :S
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Hahaha, no te preocupes, es normal que pase eso, a mi se me olvida toodooo C:
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Vira: Being a klutz it looks like.
Sango: Oooo these annoying tails ><
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Calrith: T . T
Yup tails are annoying sometimes, as for her she doesn't care anymore, this is a daily thing
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Vira: *giggles slightly* poor dear
Sango: I can't imagen >.<
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Indeed, she gets bullied everyday for being a low class ugly demon
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Vira: She deserves it in this case
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Gwen tied her tail to the light when she wasn't looking and she returned to the lords side andΒ calrith Β fell
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haha a sort of but no she didn't do that directly, but she knew it and laughed at her scheme
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I knew gwen was involved xD
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hahaha well she is a really high grade demon and she hates her
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No reason, she just hates her, she hates her face, the way she talks, everything... just because, she just saw her and hated her.
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well I'm working on that story, just fleshing out details to see if I will do it. since I believe I'm happy with the style look
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Oh tell me more please :3 *Big puppy dog eyes*
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hehe gladly, well it's a dumb short story about a demon "calrith" that is a low class demon who is pretty much useless at everything except at making lists... so she's useless. And apart from that she gets constantly bullied by other demons especially Gwen and other high ranking demons. That's everyday life for Calrith, but one day the little dumb lord Inosus, after watching a rom com, he falls in love with the actress and orders Gwen to go and bring said actress to her, she refuses and says that clarity should be the one doing that, and as a result he sends them both.
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hahaha well Gwen only likes the lord she serves, she is super protective and jealous but she is the number one of its harem and is willing to fight for that position. where anyone to steal it.
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xD Makes me think a love triangle would be surprising. :3
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Gwen trapped between her lord and a rogue demon. Her loyality belongs to her lord but what of the demon that had stolen more than valuables but also a kiss.... And perhaps more from her. xP
How does that sound?
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hmm interesting I haven't thought about a side plot to Gwen. But she is actually missing one
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Sure, I usually don't ask for help or stuff but if you want to make suggestions please do
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Well like I said I could make a thief demon for you. After all there are 3 types of character Main, supporting, and background. They main have solid history that get know right away or told over time as the story progresses. While the supporting can have more vague history but they still need a scene or so that give the reader a bit of insight to them making them feel more real.
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hmm yeah.. but let me just sort out the story and it details, and the arcs.
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Well if you need a proof reader/ editor I'm happy to help
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hahaha thanks a lot you've been quite helpful, but I got kind of mixed feelings haha because I want you to enjoy the story like everybody else, but your help is useful lol :S
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I do love the story but it would be nice to give help where needed
And I could enjoy it twice as much knowing that I'm helping the Maker of the story
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hmmmm.. i see well yeah that's a good point. BTW are you good with names?
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I'm fairly good, depends on how you want it to sound
I look up names based on character design and personality.
Then I choose what I think fits best. I would probably give 3 - 5 names to pick from so the choice is ultimately yours.
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hmm well I'm struggling with the series name heheh I con't figure it out
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oh you need a title. What is the kingdom called?
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Irkalla is the region Inosus III palace is at, the whole story develops inside this palace and never goes outside this part of Irkalla
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"The Fall of Inosus" has a nice ring to it or "Inosus III Rising"
"Chaos in Irkalla" or "Encounters in Irkalla"
How do those sound?
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hmm I like them, the one of the fall sounds nice.. but they are way too dark, or serious for the story. It's comedic after all. hmm hmmmm
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The best thing about Dark and serious is how you can change it to make it a comedy. Encounters can mean enemies or friends. And FallΒ of Inosus can mean that it gets torn down only to be changed for the better
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Yeah you're right there, hmmm.. I wonder I'll have to ponder this tittle thing more
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The title is something major in the story or what it means
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yeah... it's quite important
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Yep. So any ideas you have?
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right now.. no not many.... I mean my metaphysical central question should lead me to a nice title but I can't seem to get any ideas
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