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pastelmutt [2013-09-07 03:21:38 +0000 UTC]

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Wowwie, your shading style is so nice to look at, it's soft, but at the same time rough! It's really nice to look at!
Most of the anatomy on this picture is spot on! But there are a few things that bother me:
Well, I am not sure if this is intentional, seeing as the title is "Twisted", but his body is a bit long, and his left hind leg shouldn't be facing left so much.
His forearm, I suppose you can call it, or the ulna and radius, should probably more straight, in this piece it seems to be a little flimsy. Also, you may want to study wings a little more, the metacarpals (the line things on the wings) are meant to spread from the thumb (the spike).

All in all, this is a lovely piece, I particularly love this shading style, it's really lovely and the blending in this is magnificent! Awesome job! ^-^

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Ashenee [2013-09-06 15:35:40 +0000 UTC]

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I'm so jealous of your digital style! I really am! It's gorgeous and unique e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> I can tell its your style. I'm digging the way you do fur as well! Just one suggestion and that would be to maybe add a little highlights to your fur. Not SUPER highlights but just a few and very light ones so it looks a little more textured! Other than that I don't see too much wrong here! You have a good sense of anatomy and perspective. I suppose the string the necklace is on could have more shading to it. I know it's hard but it sticks out just a bit e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> anyways you did a wonderful job here and there are just a few things that really need critiquing! Keep it up e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

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AmethystCreatures In reply to Ashenee [2013-09-06 22:22:15 +0000 UTC]

ahhh! thank you so much! I really appreciate this your points were fair and helped me a lot, I'm gonna keep those in mind, thanks!

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Ashenee In reply to AmethystCreatures [2013-09-07 03:36:25 +0000 UTC]

no problem!Ā 

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