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Published: 2017-02-11 11:49:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 490; Favourites: 87; Downloads: 1
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Dis is my master piece of art, it took months 2 finished it. I drew it myself & my sis Emma help with coloring bcoz I'm too lazy 2 color
u guys could say dis is a collab art.Undertale: sāns ,gaster blaster © Toby fox
Design of the right gaster blaster © fav.me/d9uy3lq
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Comments: 21
Another critique as requested:
Negative:
I think the main thing is adding more detail to this and shading I think would have been good to help flesh out the details you do have, like creating shadows and light, bringing it a bit more 3D quality to it which would have brought out more of your own style through.
I think signing a piece is good maybe just having your signature and your sisters on it would have been good and leaving the coloured by in just the description on here as I feel it detracts from the piece.
Positive:
It's well drawn, all proportions seem correct, symmetrical, lines are very clear and defined, nice and clean this isn't something to sniff at as it's hard to do this.
Summary:
Overall a good piece in design and drawing. I haven't commented on your sister's colouring as you asked me for the critique not her if you want me to comment on it I can do I will update the critique 
I feel you need to take a few more risks as in try to bring your style through it more so it's not an exact match to the original but is still well drawn if that makes sense?
addition of more details and shading would add so much more depth and 3D to this which would help with bringing your own style through. If you're stuck on how to do this lookup on Deviantart, Youtube and google it will push your art to a new place this might take some practice but I'm sure you can pull it off! This is a good piece keep up the good work!
If there is any more you'd like me to do just ask
Jaythepunk\m/
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Is very nice, and more if they did it together.
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Hasn't anyone notice Mickey Mouse in on top right of the deviation? XD
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Yep I do 
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Yeah it was very fun working together 
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+1 Fav and watch and i LOVE it get it get it ... LV ... no ...ok.....
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Yep! I get it but it's not funny sorry :/
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i know it's not funny but this is the easiest type of joke to make :/
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Ba dum tsss! Nice pun dude! I love it!😂
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hehe sorry I really had to XD
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No need to be sorry
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Thanks! I put a lot of effort into this drawing and it's very worth it! Thanks for the compliment!😄 but you can criticize it if you want to, I won't get mad because I know it will help me improve my drawing skills.
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Nice work! It looks like it took a lot of effort.
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Yes it does took a lot of effort into this piece and thanks for the compliment! 😄
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