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LauraCallsen [2012-11-06 21:49:15 +0000 UTC]
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although this picture already has a critique I want to write one ( my first on dA) as well.
The vision of this image is very good. You obiously know how to use your equipment and have everything under control.The light is gorgeous and I especially like the shadows on the models neck. I don't like the budda figure in the picture. My eyes can't focus the model, it's very distracting my view. The white curtain is also a bit too dominant, but it's okay. The colors work together very well, I really like this.
To create an original portrait is very hard. I think it's a very good portrait with enough originality to stand out from many other pictures. But in the end it's a pretty "simple" portait, which isn't a bad thing. Simplicity can be very attractive to the eye.
Tere's nothing bad to say about the technique. As already mentioned: you had everything under control and know how to play with light and shadows.
I like how the model is focusing the viewer through the mirror. I like the pose and the way she is dressed. It reall works togehter. I like the impact of all this together. I think that's what caught my attention in the first place. I just like this composition very much ( although, there are some little things I would change)
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Easak In reply to LauraCallsen [2012-11-08 19:00:21 +0000 UTC]
I agree with you - maybe the white curtain could have been of a lighter lace pattern rather than the white and would not draw one away from the subject of the shoot
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planetzog [2012-11-06 07:56:53 +0000 UTC]
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this is a magical image..ful of suspense and provocatation, highly original, and creative, which makes it a photo worthy of commentary. It's just one of those that come along once in a while, a break with the sometimes rather dull self portraits that flood DA, so it's a well done for execution of an original image, maybe a title like Mystique..or A Magical Moment..either way it stands up in it's own right with or without a title..so great work 10 out of 10 for a bit of inspirational work...keep shooting and thinking out of the box,because it's not the technical skills that make a good photo, it;s the creativity that makes it a GREAT photo!!
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