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Published: 2009-08-27 16:47:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 1293; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 8
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..First page of a comic I was GOING to do, but hadn't gotten around to.I'm not finishing it, so I'm gonna give you this shit.
There's lots of errors in it, but I don't feel like going to MSPaint or whatever and fix it. -.-;
It's a little concept I had in my head in a while. It takes place in my school - basically, it gets raided. All the nice people I know are evacuated from the building and brought to safety. The rest gets eliminated, or in Layman's terms, killed horribly.
Every one of my characters gets the pleasure to work with this little raiding mission, and the ones who don't want to are eventually forced by having a control device stuck on their head, hence OOC!Riko there. Isn't that lovely?
These are the most characters I've ever put in one drawing/panel. ._.; Eh. Figures. I'm not very good at it. I'm not ever doing that again. But I'm sort of happy with how it turned out. Yeah..
Enjoy, and please comment.
SIDE NOTES ARE GOOD FOR YA.
Characters are mine, and everyone knows who Trillens and Irkens belong to. == /Dies
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And this evening, I finally realized what it made me think of.
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When at 1:02 that guy walks in, and when at the end she sends the not very nice resurrected persons to kill all the other not very nice persons at 2:53.
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YSE? What does that mean?
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D'awwww... sad to know you didn't get to finish this. :c Maybe you can still work on this comic... Like when you're really pissed at your classmates or something, you could do this as a vent comic.
I think you did a great job in that last panel. I like all the poses and expressions you gave your characters in that panel. It's awesome. I'm especially fond of that Trillien's (forgot his name lol xD) pose, hanging from the locker door. It looks bad ass. >D
Hehe... that girl in the first panel on the left looks like Liz. |DDD
Anyway, nice work on this one. Hopefully you can continue it sometime. C:
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Yeah. xD; I didn't have the motivation and skills for it.
Maybe I can finish it later though. o3o
xD Thanks lol, though I'm not fond of some.
His name is Daniel. C: Lol. And I thought it'd be fitting indeed. xD
XD She does, doesn't she? I knew I shouldn't have gone for red eyes.
Thanks, I hope so. xD
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Yeah... if you got asshats in school this year and they piss you off... use your rage to finish this comic. xDD
You're welcome. <33 Well, some are good and others aren't right? c:
Yeah. xDD
You're welcome... <333
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*sighs* I wish I could do that.....it'd be so amazing.....
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bwahahaha. very awesome. 8D
too bad you won't continue :c
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Thanks. xD Yeah I was hoping to continue, but I slacked off on the second page, which really sucked.
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Too bad actually. I like your comics 8D I'll be posting a critique to your twins one, but I need time yet XD
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Yeah, but I'll make a continuous one soon. xDD Thanks though.
Take your time. x3
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ha! Die not very nice students of Lucy's school!!!!>8D
I can tell, I gunna like dis comic
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VIOLENCE IN SCHOOLS! Always good for a comic, also, love the RAID scene, very actiony.
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Epic! I like the guy with the fire stuff coming off his tail XD
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It's a little light. |D But thanks.
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Cool 
I was wondering what was up with Riko in this XD;
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Yeah, I wanted my revenge somehow, even though it's in my head. 
Raffi was wondering that too when I showed it to him. XD Hahaha. I needed an excuse to have Riko trying to kill someone so I put some control device on his head. >w>
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Very good way of mental revenge
I see X3 Poor Riko
Brud: Hmmm.. That control device. Does it only make him aggressive?
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Yes, indeed.
Yeah, poor thing. XD
Well, it does more things to him, but it's in an experimental phase so I dunno what else it does.
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Brud: What orders does he obey?
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Brud: Hmmm. Hey, Riko! Sit!
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Riko: *Perks up and looks at Brud; sits*
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Brud: Go fetch me a soda!
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YES! 8D The people in my school are SO screwed. XD;
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YAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! 8D That's what they get for.... um... angering you... with their existence! 8D
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WITH MUSIC AND LOTSA KILLING 8D
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