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Published: 2013-01-28 12:38:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 17114; Favourites: 74; Downloads: 193
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Fred: "Dar...uh...youz girls better not be slackin'!"
Luin: "Of course not! This beach is the perfect spot to survey the tides for my latest invention!"
Beatrice: "Ah dohn't get it! You said there were peachy flumbumikins here! These are peachy pumflumigans! Ah dohn't like being tricked! Derp!!!!"
Kim: "If it's all the same, I found a floating rock that glows blue. Should we have it inspected in case it does something weird?"
Fred: "Dar, uh...it probably does nothing."
MEANWHILE...
Shaniqua: "Oh Ted! That is so sweet! So you think we should get married after all?"
Ted: "Absolutely, Shaniqua! And I promise, I'll buy you the red gloves you need to control your powers as Cherry Babe, so you don't wind up with those Camelorum losers over there like Lemon Witch did. And I won't let her hurt you either."
Shaniqua: "Ted, I love you! Although...I don't think Lemon Witch would consider me a rival. Not that I intend to find out."
Kim: "Actually, Shaniqua, she looks up to you as a role model. She's heard about what you can do even without gloves for control."
Ted: "Well, that mystery just solved itself. Shall we shop for rings?"
Shaniqua: "Sure thing. Let's let these poor saps get their work done."
Luin: "By all means! And when I rule the world, I'll show you mercy on account of it!"
Ted (confused): "Eh...sure. Just try not to knock over any more buildings by accident, okay?"
Fred: "Dah, ar...back to woik! Quit buggin' the patrons!"
Kim: "Roger, Fred. In your neighborhood!"
Fred (confused): "Der...what???"
Kim: "Nothing."
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... not the conversations i had in mind when i drew this but .. sure why not
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Just trying to be consistent with pre-established personality continuities elsewhere. By all means though, write out your version so we can cross-compare.
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Oops... double post.
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If I had to do penal community service, I suppose picking up trash while barefoot on a beach is better than a lot of other options.
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i guess it it's a pretty easy job , although if i were in their place i would be envious of all the other people who are relaxing and/or having fun
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hehehe
or don't get cough
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Exactly. Because catching pneumonia is such a dastardly thing to do. :-p
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did i mentioned i'm from Romania and sometimes fail at English
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I totally forgot that important little detail. But now that you mention it, that actually could prove helpful. When I get around to writing Cherinob 1, you can tell me if Boris is acting believable for a Romanian or not, so my published version won't be completely embarrassing.
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sure , i would love to help , i can start with saying that Boris is not a particularity popular name in Romania (unless he has parents/grandparents from Russia )
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Well, that does help a lot more than baby name websites do. How about his last name of "Heminski"? That was also picked from a Google search. He's a crane operator in the story, for a firm that also owns the science lab that Kritchobol the demon takes over. Yeah, it's gonna be little like Underworld, but with angels and demons instead of vampires and werewolves.
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nah Heminski isn't Romanian
you can try here , these are Romanian names ro.wikipedia.org/wiki/List%C4%…
the most popular romanian name is Ion
if you want romanian name with russian influences you can go with Alexi , Cantemir , Cazimir, Dragomir, Emil , Ivan , Nicolae , Teodor , Valentin , Victor , Vladimir
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Are those first or last names? I assume prenume means first name? Might stick with "Boris Heminski" for Boris, but I'll definitely keep the rest of this list in mind for naming other characters.
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Lovely art uniforms andexpressions.When everybody else is having fun the bad girl inmates havve to do their community service very publicly!
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And beach clean-up very likely means having to collect and dispose of dead fish, which can be a nauseating task. Working out on the beach devoid of shade will assure them of quite a sunburn by day's end on those body parts not covered by their uniforms, especially if their trousers have a tendency to sag and expose some butt crack when they stoop down, as the prisoner with the mohawk is doing. I would expect that the tops of their feet, at least, to be an angry red.
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I think, if I ever have Anir revisit this trio, they should definitely be a little bit sunburned.
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i can imagine being very red all over..)
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Wipg, Do you think perhaps you would be blushing under the gaze of the revelers?
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i certainly would be if i was in prison uniform on the chaingang!
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I think you would be simply adorable; barefoot and shackled, wearing a similar uniform, except a couple sizes too small, so that the pants would barely stay up,and the top would ride up allowing your bosom to pop out the bottom. And a very becoming maidenly blush to cap it off!
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c'est la vie ,
they have to pay for their wrong doings
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This is very true and very just
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Lovely drawing I wish I could draw backgrounds like you do
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As Rusembell points out, there are lots of great details to discover. I am also very happy with the prisoners' poses and unhappy expressions.
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heh
glad you enjoy it
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