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Published: 2010-08-01 11:36:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 1272; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 29
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This was an uncolored pencil drawing and I uploaded it and tried to color it with Photohop.Did it work out? I hope you will say.
Critique and feedback greatly appreciated.
Also please visit my gallery!Pleaseee!
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blackinktrio [2010-11-27 04:16:51 +0000 UTC]
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Ohhh, really quite like this one e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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I love how you did a non-black outline, but the outline's really only good for colors lighter than it. It'd look a lot etter if the clothes' outlines were in a darker shade or just black :3
The body's form is excellent!
One suggestion would be that you add definition near the hips. Have the stomach curve in just so slighty, and then stop. It'd at least look nice on her right hip :3
With her head, have her eyes just slightly more inward. Having the eye at the edge of the face makes it lose it's three-dimensional effect a bit. If seen at a 3/4ths view, the eye won' be the same shape as it is when seen face-on. It's not actually changing shape (of course), but by the way you see it, you'll see more of the side facing you and less of the side farther away. (woah. Jumbling words....not sure if I'm making sense here xD )
Also, just throwing it out there that I love those feet. Love love love. You did a great job there e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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HydroGX [2010-11-04 08:25:31 +0000 UTC]
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hmm...for this, though I don't see traditional art much cuz I'm more of a digital artist, but anyway into the point that this looks great! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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(Big Grin)"/> though the outlines is kinda odd colored
e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="
" title="Sweating a little..."/> but the coloring and everything else looks great! ^^ however the red eyes looks creepy to me XDDD though I don't hav much to say for this, I could say that it looks wonderful! ^^ and if I had some words in mind it would be: Great, good, nice, wonderful, pretty and etc. ^^
I hope this helps out alot ^^ keep it up and good luck in the future ^^ <33
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