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Antarija — The Untold - part 5
Published: 2014-06-08 22:54:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 5667; Favourites: 45; Downloads: 19
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Well...
Khail can be a jerk sometimes
I must admit that I had a huge problem with this part and it's all Bianca's fault. In game I just hated her with all my might so it was a big challenge for me to stop myself from making her a total derp...
And about that part where Akashe uses growl... I was sure he had this move, but apparently Tepigs have Tail whip instead... Who knew? So I'm sorry for that mistake.
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The rock has a face o3o I never noticed because of all that bloody o0o
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Haha, then now you're one of the very few who noticed it xD
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He's kinda harsh but it is the truth though... poor Bianca.
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Yeah, he might be a bit of a jerk but she has to face the sad truth.
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He's a good jerk tho... I dunno, I like the guy, lol.
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ISN'T KHAIL BEING A LITTLE RUDE WITH BIANCA? BY THE WAY, IS SHE HIS GIRLFRIEND?
OH BIANCA! YOU ALMOST KILL HIM
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Well, someone has to, right?
And no, she's definitely not his girlfriend xD
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WRONG, HE DOESN'T HAVE TO BE SO MEAN WITH HER
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I want to hate on him for being a jerk, but he has a point, and I know for a fact that some people need to be told the truth that way for them to understand, soooooo..... He gets a free pass for this time.
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Aha, a free pass! Yeah!
Hating the jerk would be fine, but to be honest - I've never liked Bianca. So I can't blame him for acting this way ^^
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Same XD""
But not liking Bianca isn't an excuse for forgiving a jerk.. INNER TURMOIL
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Anything can be an excuse for forgiving that jerk :3
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Oh, yes.
Hotness counts more than moral values.
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Those creepy eyes of Patrats deserve that ability, don't you think?
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You've got a couple of typos and spelling errors on this comic, frame 8, 'Hod did you" and frame 28 "Takle"
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Oops.
Thanks, I'll try to be more careful!
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Yay, komediowość! Aczkolwiek nie wiedziałam, że dusza Khaila jest taka... urocza? Usta w trójeczkę i te sprawy X3 Buahaha, blokada Leer'a, biedny Deil XD
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Nie ma to jak komediowość z tragicznego zgonu lub niezdolnoścl schowania oczu! Wiwat ja!
Oj tam, każda dusza jest urocza, gdy odchodzi z tego padłu, aby czasem tam u góry nie odesłali jej za brak zaangażowania
Nie bój nic, w normalnym stanie jego duszyczka jest iście złowieszczaaaaa... Ale co się tam będzie z tym afiszował.
Kiedyś mu przejdzie! Mam nadzieję... I jego najbliższe otoczenie chyba też.
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Hahaha! XD So apparently Khail's soul is that of a wobbuffet?
I love the battle scene, especially the leer panel.
... She deserved it but Bianca's gonna need some burn heals.
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Haha, who knows?
Thanks! I've always thought that Patrats have a bit... creepy eyes ;]
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Me too! XD Btw, the panel where he says "but I can't" is just hilarious. He's like "my face is always in this perpetual leer expression."
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Hehe, maybe he just has no idea how does it really look like.
My little murderer ;3
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Oh man XD Deil needs more screentime.
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Indeed. And he will get it!
I hope...
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Wow, I really like your concept! Your art is amazing, too.
You just gained a stalker.
And the marks on those trees... I'd make a guess for Sneasel and Weavile, but they don't fit in the beginning of Black and White.
Ah well. I'll see what you are up to soon enough^^
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Thank you, I'm really glad to hear that!
Hahah, I love that icon xD
Honestly? I didn't even think about it. I've been trying out many "bandits" marks but all of them were just... stupid. And in the end I just made the simplest mark that came to my head.
Sorry, it's not that epic...
Yet.
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I see^^ I though that maybe you went with Weaviles Pokédex-entry. The used it in the Pokémon Adventure-manga, too.
I think it was on ...this page . They use it as a way to communicate with their whole species as you will see on the following pages (in case you feel like reading them).
Well, if that was not what you intendet, I will look forward to your real idea!
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...
I didn't know something like that exists! *-* (I've just recently returned to the Pokemon world after a rather long break, so you can say that I'm a real newbie now... )
But it's kinda awesome. Must read more!
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If I was you, I'd start at the Beginning^^ This is chapter 452 already, so you'd miss a loooooot.
It's also kinda nice to see the art improving over the time. It still kinda sucks at the start, but it gets better and better.
It actually is really old already, I think it startet when the first games where released.
Ah well^^ Have fun!
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Don't worry, I will start from the beginnig
Thanks!
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Harsh, but Bianca needs to catch on fast. Khail may be a jerk, but he has a point. Bianca is wet behind the ears, and she's not really ready to be out in the field.
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True, she's completely unprepared for the outside world.
Every time I saw her in the game I've always wondered what even made her think it was a good idea to leave her town...
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Some people get it in their heads, that they can take on the world. So they jump in with both feet, and get sucked under. Instead of asking people who know, they just assume. That's the problem, and I never understood why asking questions, wound so many people's pride. If you don't know, you don't know, and there should be no shame in asking someone who does know more than you.
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Indeed. That's probably because they're afraid of asking a "stupid question", they don't want to look like an idiot (in their opinion). As if not knowing something was such a big deal. I mean, no-one's perfect, right? And no-one knows everything... It's far worse to make a stupid mistake because of being afraid to ask that "stupid" question.
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Exactly. The only person you hurt, by not asking questions is yourself. No one else suffers, just you.
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Well, it's not just you, actually. For example, in my kind of work it's also animals that could suffer then.
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Yeah, there are other things that could suffer as well. Still, you're held accountable for said mistakes, and it's not necessarily the best thing to have on your track record.
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This is a really good story so far.
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