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Published: 2008-04-30 08:54:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 80; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description Too different to be together,
Too alike to be apart.
Too much history to forget,
Too many plans that didnt happen.
Too many "How?"s,
Too many "Why?"s.
Too much love,
Too much hate.
Too often I should have spoken,
Too many times I should have kept my mouth shut.
Too stubborn to budge,
Too blind to see,
Too afraid to admit.
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Comments: 3

Gibby87 [2008-04-30 12:22:47 +0000 UTC]

Another good poem, i love the way you've written it. I've tried that style before and never managed to get it right.

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aokiunderscore In reply to Gibby87 [2008-04-30 14:16:25 +0000 UTC]

I didn't know it was a certain style lol. It was more just some random free writing. Just writing stuff down without thinking about it too much.
Thank you though

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Gibby87 In reply to aokiunderscore [2008-04-30 14:17:47 +0000 UTC]

Not so much a style but in that way, using one word and basing a poem around its repeated use, everytime i try it just sounds crap and falls apart

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