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ApplauseJunkie — FlutterDash--Pilot Pt. 3
Published: 2012-02-15 19:11:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 4109; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 15
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Description Rainbow Dash's eyes fluttered open the next morning to greet a clear, crisp sky. All the clouds had been cleared away after the storm of the previous night, having done their job and washed clean the air over Ponyville. She smiled contentedly; the morning after a storm was always the most beautiful. This particular morning was made even lovelier by the other warm presence lying against Dash in her cloud bed. She smiled warmly. Fluttershy was still sleeping, so Dash laid her head back down against her, sighing contentedly. Nothing had happened last night, just a few soft, shy kisses. The blue pegasus had burned with desire, but since it was their first night together, she hadn't wanted to offend the sensitive Fluttershy.

Slowly, green-blue eyes opened. "Rainbow Dash?" she asked sleepily, rolling over to face the other pegasus. Dash smiled at her. "Good morning, Fluttershy," she said, leaning down and kissing the tip of her nose. Fluttershy blushed, smiling up at her friend. "Good morning."

For that instant, Rainbow Dash was positive she had never been happier before nor ever would be this happy again. "Hey, 'Shy?" she murmured, still gently nuzzling her.

"Yes, Rainbow Dash?" came the quiet reply.

The way the yellow filly always used her full name made her smile affectionately.  She kissed her again, still gently. Fluttershy reciprocated cooperatively. "So…" her voice cracked again. A flash of frustration lit her brain. She had barely said anything; how could her voice crack on the word "so"?! Oh, well. She had to finish now, or she never would. "I think I love you, 'Shy."

The other pegasus looked up at her for a moment, then smiled and giggled. "I know."

She knew? Dash stared down at her, confused. How did she know? Had she been that obvious? Until last night, but even then. Just because she kissed somepony didn't always mean she was in love with them. Maybe Fluttershy thought kissing and love always went hoof in hoof?

"I love you, too, Rainbow Dash." The words were quiet, but not shy at all. There was a confidence in the way she said it that ignited a surge of emotion in Dash's gut and suddenly she had to bite her lip to suppress the overwhelming instinct to pull Fluttershy as close as she possibly could and cover every inch of her body in hot kisses. To love her forever. To keep her always within arm's reach, to constantly hold onto her and protect her from anything that could ever possibly frighten her. But Fluttershy saw the sudden tension in her body and looked up at her in concern. "A-are you okay, Rainbow Dash?"

One more second of self-restraint and suddenly Rainbow couldn't hold it back anymore. She grabbed Fluttershy as tightly as she could, holding onto her with all four legs, clutching her passionately close to her, as close as she could get, until she could feel the filly's heart beating in time with her own. "I've loved you for such a long time, Flutteryshy," she murmured into the pony's fur, eyes squeezed closed in happiness.

Fluttershy squeaked at the suddenness of Dash's movements, but made no effort to escape her friend's clutches, even returning her embrace. "Me, too, Rainbow Dash. You're so strong and brave. I wish I could be like you, sometimes…"

The blue pegasus's insides rebelled against the last sentiment. Fluttershy, like her? A rough-and-tumble tomboy like her? Always in fights and races and constantly in danger of breaking her neck with her latest dangerous stunt? She couldn't even picture it. Fluttershy was meant for the ground, for butterflies and bunnies, for tea and cozy blankets by the fire. "No," she said. "I like you the way you are."

Slowly, Fluttershy pulled away from Rainbow's crushing embrace far enough to bring their muzzles together again in a kiss, but this one wasn't as shy. The filly let the force of the forelegs around her pull her deeper into Dash's lips, and of course the blue pegasus didn't resist this new strength. She let herself melt into Fluttershy's advances, giving no resistance to the fiery passion that welled up in the deep recesses of her gut and spread to her flank and chest, screaming through her body with every pulse of their connected hearts. Fluttershy felt the heat radiating from Dash's body and was almost surprised that she wasn't offended or frightened, but instead discovered the same heat spreading throughout her own body. With some minor difficulty, the yellow filly allowed her mouth to slip open and welcome what had been pressing against the inside of Dash's lips the whole time, waiting for the signal that it was okay to enter. As soon as it was, the blue pegasus eagerly invaded Fluttershy's mouth, her hooves scrambling to pull her closer against her heated body, to push against her, to be with her. But when she let one hoof slide down too far, Fluttershy made a little squeak, and Dash pulled away instantly, looking at her worriedly.

"I-I'm sorry, Rainbow Dash," the yellow filly murmured, avoiding her friend's gaze. "I've just…never…"

Rainbow was practically shocked. She had never even considered that it might be her shy friend's first time. Well, now that she thought about it, who would Fluttershy have been with before? She was such a timid pony; it wasn't really in her character to do things like that. But Rainbow Dash smiled down at her friend. "It's okay, Fluttershy. If you don't want to we don't have to."

Fluttershy's face instantly changed and she looked up at her friend, totally surprised. "Oh, no! That isn't what I meant at all!" At Rainbow's surprise she blushed. "I-I mean, I wanna be with you, Rainbow Dash. I-I just need you to talk me through it…"

Dash's surprise softened back into a smile. She kissed Fluttershy gently, holding her softly. "Okay, Fluttershy. It isn't gonna be scary, I promise," she whispered, slowly sliding her hoof down Fluttershy's chest.
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Rainbow Dash wiped her muzzle on a corner of her cloud, moving back up to be eye-to-eye with a now very flushed and out of breath Fluttershy. Smiling at her lover, the blue pegasus tucked her head into her shoulder and laid against her gently, decorating all of the surface she could reach with a sprinkle of gentle kisses. "How was it?" she asked quietly.

Fluttershy made a soft, gasping squeak. Slowly, she breathed, "W-wonderful…it was wonderful…"

"Not scary?"

"N-not scary at all…"
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Comments: 33

Lupineborn [2015-02-02 22:46:07 +0000 UTC]

Best FlutterDash story ever. I melted the whole time lol very well done!!

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ApplauseJunkie In reply to Lupineborn [2015-02-02 23:50:22 +0000 UTC]

There's more in my gallery--but be warned, I've changed my otp since I wrote these, so there won't be any more.

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Lupineborn In reply to ApplauseJunkie [2015-02-03 11:43:20 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I read about that fine by me, I am sure everything else is gonna be just as well-written and great.

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AnimalAnimeFan [2014-09-16 06:34:25 +0000 UTC]

Must not... change... my OTP.... gah! But this is so adorable!! <3 well done on this one, well done! 

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veeyaneeh [2013-12-20 06:39:17 +0000 UTC]

i love the  story is there part four/

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ApplauseJunkie In reply to veeyaneeh [2013-12-20 16:44:34 +0000 UTC]

All of the FlutterDash stories in my gallery are the same plotline.

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veeyaneeh In reply to ApplauseJunkie [2013-12-23 06:59:48 +0000 UTC]

aw alright

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allenUzumaki95 [2013-08-20 23:36:39 +0000 UTC]

i lov this story 

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katban [2013-05-29 07:42:45 +0000 UTC]

hoow-whee hot damn, ending on a good noteX3

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Pikminchick [2012-07-15 23:44:57 +0000 UTC]

there are some moments in life where you just wanna say DAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW this is one of those moments

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LillyTheOmegaWolf [2012-07-04 14:02:46 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome. Rather... suggestive... at the end though but certainly a great read.

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ApplauseJunkie In reply to LillyTheOmegaWolf [2012-07-04 16:13:35 +0000 UTC]

Haha, Dashie's just a little frisky, that's all. That's a big part of being in a relationship for her.

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JubilationTree In reply to ApplauseJunkie [2012-11-20 11:56:59 +0000 UTC]

Could not agree more, hawhawhaw.

Glad you left out the details. Not that we didn't want them, but it was just not necessary to write about it. We will figure the details out for ourselves...

Lovely ending!

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ApplauseJunkie In reply to JubilationTree [2012-11-27 23:36:39 +0000 UTC]

Well be prepared for some of Grounded, because I have to get a little more graphic in there or the story won't make sense.

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jaymiejordan [2012-07-03 15:54:45 +0000 UTC]

dude i love it the shy outcast the bold and strong one the strong one find soft love the shy one finding the hot crazy rush of love

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ApplauseJunkie In reply to jaymiejordan [2012-07-03 16:17:45 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you like it!

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gamerjunk [2012-05-15 09:45:41 +0000 UTC]

is this the last chapter? awesome btw

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ApplauseJunkie In reply to gamerjunk [2012-05-15 14:07:30 +0000 UTC]

This is the last installment of Pilot, but I have several other FlutterDash stories in my gallery. Some of them haven't been added to groups and stuff because they get a little less family friendly as they progress.

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DolphinBuster [2012-04-06 23:41:35 +0000 UTC]

DAWWW! cute story ;] but i had a little difficulties reading it, maybe spreading out the paragraphs ? ^-^ Fourth Part coming?

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Jaida857 [2012-03-06 05:39:39 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, that was actually pretty good! I'm not completely into Flutterdash, but I don't hate it, so I thought I'd give this fanfic a read. I wasn't sure how I felt about the end at first, but I like how you made it obvious what happened, and yet still didn't go into detail as to make the readers feel awkward. I really like your writing style, and I can't wait to see more! I'll add you to my watch list so I'll be the first to know when you write another Flutterdash.

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ApplauseJunkie In reply to Jaida857 [2012-03-06 16:02:19 +0000 UTC]

Have you read Turbulence and Grounded yet? There's more coming of Grounded soon, but it's Midterm week, so writing is at a standstill until Thursday.

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Jaida857 In reply to ApplauseJunkie [2012-03-06 17:43:33 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I read them last night! Ummm, they were both a little descriptive for me, but that's just me, and I'm like that. Other than that, I loved them!

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ApplauseJunkie In reply to Jaida857 [2012-03-06 19:12:18 +0000 UTC]

Oh, descriptive about the clopping? Yeah, I couldn't get around it, especially in Grounded, since I wanted Fluttershy to walk in right in the middle of it. Sorry if it bothers you. I try to keep things comfortable, but sometimes the writing just demands a little graphics.

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Jaida857 In reply to ApplauseJunkie [2012-03-07 00:52:30 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. Sometimes you just have to, otherwise it ruins the point. I actually think you did a pretty good job. I mean, a lot of people wouldn't have taken readers like me into consideration and done it the easy way. Because of how you did it, I'll definitely be watching for more.

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ApplauseJunkie In reply to Jaida857 [2012-03-07 01:15:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I have a lot in store for FlutterDash, so stay tuned!

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Jaida857 In reply to ApplauseJunkie [2012-03-07 01:50:56 +0000 UTC]

AWE. SOME.

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Dexiom [2012-03-02 08:32:35 +0000 UTC]

u mind spreading the text out more so its easier for ppls to read

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ApplauseJunkie In reply to Dexiom [2012-03-02 16:38:16 +0000 UTC]

What do you mean?

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Dexiom In reply to ApplauseJunkie [2012-03-02 23:54:10 +0000 UTC]

like patroison does his story's

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Dexiom In reply to ApplauseJunkie [2012-03-02 23:53:41 +0000 UTC]

like have spaces between sentences

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ApplauseJunkie In reply to Dexiom [2012-03-02 23:55:35 +0000 UTC]

I'll see. I honestly prefer them the way they are. If someone else asks about it I will, but it takes a lot of time to go through and edit all twenty-something stories. Sorry. :/

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MissVeya [2012-02-16 16:56:05 +0000 UTC]

Well, I still loved it, and while it felt awkward to read(I am really not used to read fanfics on the middle term, the ones I usually find are either all out on clopness or just mild romance...), I still want to see more, there is something I just love on your way to write.

To think I almost gave up on shipping fanfics at all, I recently got in a rather confusing relationship, and I noticied that some fanfics were actually clouding my judgement, but a good fanfic is still one of the best ways to let steam off, or at least take my head off the problems for a while, either way, I am glad I decided to check it today.

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ApplauseJunkie In reply to MissVeya [2012-02-16 20:46:57 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you love my fics so much! Hopefully I'll keep them real enough that I won't cloud your judgement.

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