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Published: 2006-11-14 00:47:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 3327; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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--------->READ LEFT TO RIGHT PLEASE
Lawl heres the prologue for the comic!!!
sigh, this is the first time i ever screentoned a comic..so go easy on mee
but you can still tell me what to improve on...:3Next Page: [link]
First Page: [link]
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TENACIOUS D!!
(obscure joke: in the tenacious d song "wonderboy" theres a line that goes "and they called themselves tenacious d" which is the last line of this page)
PRETTY SWWEEEET MAN!
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Omg I bet the Pokemons kill the trainers first. Yours looks butt-sexy. Mine is just shitty-looking. I don't know how to "screentone" so I just...goddammit! aeasglakjs
I made 5 more pages =] I'm uploading pages 4+5 tomorrow or right now. I haven't done page 3 yet. AHuaheuhaeuhaue
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haha dont be discouraged..your is more funny :3
and how can you skip a page o.oXD
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ok sorry to be picky but some edits::
~ *it's* this place..
~*release*...
i like your screentoning, looks good ^^
i also suggest that for the rest of the comic you make your frames slightly less regular, with more shape, they can be overlapping or whatever, just to add to the atmosphere you're trying to create.
good suspenseful atmosphere at the moment 
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omgogmg thanks x_x
i didnt noticed that i mispelled release...ahh stupid me...
oh wells, i cant edit it...
and thanks for your commentary!
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no problem! ^^
you can't edit the text?? what program are you using? i thought it was photoshop, in which case you can just change it on the text layer- but maybe i'm wrong? O_o
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yeah but i saved it on jpg file...
so i cant edit anything...>_<;
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ohhh i see >_< nooo
i always 'save as' to make it a jpeg file, and keep the psd file - it takes more memory to save both, but just in case i want to go back and edit something after i'm finished i have it there... ^^
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haha thanks for the tip xD
but this comic is just for fun, not really serious about it.
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It's pokemon remodled over O_o. (what happen if 4kids stole your comic)
( Y )
_>.<_
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lmao 4kids tv???
i would rather have cartoonnetwork steal it!! XD
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Yush. Uhh Why Cartoon Network.
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cause cartoonnetwork is way better? duh..o.o
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Proof: Adult Swim. XD
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gladd you like itt ^^
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It looks fine to me! Although, its should be "it's" lol~
I can't wait to read more~~ 8D
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