HOME | DD

ardunt — The First Tear Drop by-nc-nd

Published: 2008-07-30 15:09:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 680; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 4
Redirect to original
Description was kind enough to allow me the use of her deviation for this poem.
Related content

ardunt - Dancing Lights

ardunt - Red Senate

ardunt - Lost Again

ardunt - Bloody Mary

ardunt - Wasteland V3

ardunt - Whale Rider

ardunt - Dealing With Demons

ardunt - Ms Colossus

ardunt - Discovering Lilliput

suspicioussmoothie - Brittle and Broken 1 [🤖]

Mr3Anime - A GAZE THAT CHOSE TO SEE THE RADIANCE ( 283 ) [🤖]

lordzoul - Associations, causes wallpaper - All smartphone

suspicioussmoothie - Brittle and Broken 1 [🤖]

EndlessDarkFate - Magic of Crystal Eyes, Ancient Soul [🤖]

MaksNos - Heavenly Dawn [🤖]

equinoxxflame - [SOLD]Adoptable Design #530 [🤖] [DD]

LavilVile - The Silent Verdict [🤖]

Love-Travis-Dunstan - Human Weakness

empresskyrav - poem

okane-ga-nai - Lonley Vampire

Nvr4GetWhoUR - Jar of hearts

LimeGreen2217 - Love you

HumanChickenNugget13 - I May Hate You

inmyinsanity - bloom

funkygirl4ever95lit - Broken Promise

Barosus - Oceans of Tears
Comments: 36

KadajsFunToy [2009-03-13 02:31:49 +0000 UTC]

This is absolutely beautiful

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

ardunt In reply to KadajsFunToy [2009-03-13 16:34:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Golden-Knight [2009-03-07 00:29:38 +0000 UTC]

I am glad that you have featured this poem.

It is wonderful, very powerful.

The tight cropping of the border hems it in and brings our attention directly to it.

Great work.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

ardunt In reply to Golden-Knight [2009-03-09 15:06:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

ChibiCeleste [2008-10-26 15:12:11 +0000 UTC]

I like this poem, its sad but it has a nice feel or flow to it. Know what I mean?

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

ardunt In reply to ChibiCeleste [2008-10-27 21:56:18 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I do and thank you

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

kimodaventa [2008-07-31 11:02:25 +0000 UTC]

love it

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

ardunt In reply to kimodaventa [2008-07-31 15:02:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

VisualPoetress [2008-07-30 22:57:47 +0000 UTC]

Did you get to join [link] yet it would be lovely to share your work there

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

ardunt In reply to VisualPoetress [2008-07-31 15:06:25 +0000 UTC]

I just requested to join...looks like I need to create a clubs list in my journal.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

VisualPoetress In reply to ardunt [2008-07-31 21:10:01 +0000 UTC]

You would be a great addition to the club we need to keep getting exposure for the club and it is a good place to see alot of the visual poets gathered in one place.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

ardunt In reply to VisualPoetress [2008-07-31 22:38:56 +0000 UTC]

I was just accepted so I need to get my club list up so I am living up to the expectation.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

VisualPoetress [2008-07-30 22:56:14 +0000 UTC]

Amazing poem ... that is an extremely deep first line.... "To know you hurt because of me" very heartwrenching and emotional

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

ardunt In reply to VisualPoetress [2008-07-31 15:08:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I guess when you have wanted them to acknowledge it, it makes it easy to write.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

bellasmiles [2008-07-30 20:46:56 +0000 UTC]

I can't speak for anyone else, but every long term relationship I've had seems to find itself in some kind of scenario like that at one point or another. Well written.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

ardunt In reply to bellasmiles [2008-07-30 21:10:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for looking and seeing what I write.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

bellasmiles In reply to ardunt [2008-07-31 02:10:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for sharing.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

klmarsala [2008-07-30 19:38:01 +0000 UTC]

you have a way with painting a vivid picture of emotion my friend...

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

ardunt In reply to klmarsala [2008-07-30 19:45:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much, there is much I want to share and try and temper it with what is around me.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

godofmyworld [2008-07-30 19:12:44 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful, as usual! ^_^

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

ardunt In reply to godofmyworld [2008-07-30 19:14:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much my friend, have missed you You were one of the things in Texas I hated leaving behind.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

godofmyworld In reply to ardunt [2008-07-30 19:21:01 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I miss you too! I'm sad that you have moved, but I am happy that you had a GOOD reason to do so.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

meljoy68 [2008-07-30 17:42:31 +0000 UTC]

That was emotional.

Great piece of writing, and I love the visual you found for it.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

ardunt In reply to meljoy68 [2008-07-30 18:16:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, the photo inspired the words though I am sure they were there all along.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

meljoy68 In reply to ardunt [2008-07-30 18:18:56 +0000 UTC]

Sometimes it has to be the right moment before you can let them out.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Renco08 [2008-07-30 17:28:23 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work my friend

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

ardunt In reply to Renco08 [2008-07-30 18:16:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, it is good to write again and interact with my friends.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Renco08 In reply to ardunt [2008-07-30 18:23:16 +0000 UTC]

The new software is working well for you

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

ardunt In reply to Renco08 [2008-07-30 18:36:22 +0000 UTC]

Yes, miss some of my old stuff, but growth is fun no matter what.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

lidlshmidl [2008-07-30 16:50:43 +0000 UTC]

tnx (: and nice song

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

ardunt In reply to lidlshmidl [2008-07-30 18:17:32 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

FireOpal14 [2008-07-30 15:30:08 +0000 UTC]

That is so sad and so very beautiful!

Beautiful photograph to go with such beautiful words!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

ardunt In reply to FireOpal14 [2008-07-30 16:45:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, the photo brought it on.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

FireOpal14 In reply to ardunt [2008-07-30 18:26:00 +0000 UTC]

I can see why the photograph inspired you to write something like that! It was wonderful.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

ardunt In reply to FireOpal14 [2008-07-30 18:35:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for once I did not delay either!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

FireOpal14 In reply to ardunt [2008-07-30 19:35:44 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you didn't.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0