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sora1589 [2007-11-11 07:26:39 +0000 UTC]

this is very detailed, I love the clothes, particularly the skirt, and the strings holding her are a great idea too. The arms and bust looks fine, though perhaps the the top of the skirt is a little low, and makes the body look to long, but then I don't really know that much and the rest is fine, I think it fits to your drawing style. Great art, can't wait to see it coloured!

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vforvengeance [2007-10-15 05:26:51 +0000 UTC]

From this view, her waist is pretty low. Probably due to her skirt shape, the rear of the skirt is shorter that in the front. Wouldn't that shows off her butt when she walks? Secondly, her right underpit is pretty odd like it's dislocated. Keep it in line with her torso and avoid bumps like that. Lastly, her fingers are of a 6 years old's, how old is she, you should know that by looking at your fingers. Try fix it now while you still can before you execute it. Keep it up

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Iris-Angel [2007-10-14 14:28:08 +0000 UTC]

Awesome job! I think that the hand with the fingers not drawn on it actually looks very neat. It seems to fit the picture to me. Aside from that, great job!

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hellangelz [2007-10-14 13:41:37 +0000 UTC]

the body propostion is kinda fine, if said want to fix, it's the clothing and the ribbons

the skirt can't flout just like that and some of the ribbon seem too loose to attach on the body

since the char lifted her arm, you should make the shoulder seem lifted too


whew.... bloody red..... it reminds me of the anime being released recently.... called Higurashi.....lotsa blood and slaughtering >D

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fwenatic [2007-10-14 10:56:13 +0000 UTC]

da ribbon
and mb the cross between the ribbons above da ribbon..
if adjusted more to the right will balance the pic.
and mb the legs? looks a lil to the left..
bt its not a biggie. ^^
just pointing out as u asked..

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bucka1912 [2007-10-14 10:32:35 +0000 UTC]

It looks great! The chest area looks a bit weird to me, but its nothing big I love ho u did the folds, i cant wait to see it finished!

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