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Published: 2004-04-26 14:07:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 138; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 16
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Dont mind this >_< Its an incomplete sketch. I have major issues with drawing different poses, so I posted it here for Manga Schoolers to comment on Anatomy (cause its most likely wrong and I dont see it as usual). -_-' *sign* I just couldnt find a guidline for this pose. I looked in that book link send by but it wasn't in the first part of it... Also, anime characters - they have bigger heads then in reality? right? .... >_<Related content
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did you say mangaschool? my SN is OHW Ceta
I like your art it's pretty.
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I LOVE THIS ONE!! THE WINGS AND EYES AND HAIR ARE SO BEAUTIFUL!! AND THE ANATOMY IS SO GOOD!! I LOVE THE WINGS THE MOST!! OMG I MISSED YOUR ART SO MUCH!! 
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Nice pose, the breasts are abit high tho! But the rest is great!
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Hmm.. By looking at that pic and reading those comments above, I have only a little to say.
When thinking about manga style, body doesn't have to go like proportions in real life. So by that I can say her arms and legs aren't too long. Elbow touches the hip bone and arm below elbow usually reaches the middle of a thigh with normal proportions.. and in that pic, it's very close to that
Upper torso is a little bit tube, but that doesn't matter, only her breasts are little bit too high, they'd be there with bras, unless they've been filled with light balloon gas 
Me and my wise comments
~Sensei from Mangaschool
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Thank u Pika-sensei!!!! Love the wise comments! I have a clear picture now of what has to be fixed. So I guess I can only draw her breasts like that if I am putting clothes on her (cause she would be wearing a bra...)Thank u!!!!
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looks really nice to me i woudl love to see how the final outcome is,
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I think it's great. If you don't mind me asking, what is the book link. I need a good deal of help getting better at drawing anime in poses and all.
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Ah, this is not an easy pose to draw. Her anatomy and pose is generally correct, except for her arms are too long, and length from her knee to her heel is also too long. In this pose, the heels don't overshoot the buttocks. (Usually, stops at the mid-point of the butt.) Also, her bosom is too high up. The back of the shoulders should flow more smoothly to her back.
I've drawn a sketch here for you to take a look-see: [link]
You're right, many anime designs are larger heads than the humans in real life
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Thank u soo much!!!! u r my new great teacher!! The sketch u did is soo pretty *-* Usually I have hard time visualizing people's comments but this is perfect!! ^^
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Everything looks good. I have two comments. If I have time when I get home maybe I'll do a draw-over.
One, she needs a ribcage. The shoulders, legs, arms, hips, feet etc all look fine but her torso is just kind of a tube. If you try to imagine how the ribcage would affect the line of her torso this will make the figure look more realistic.
Also, I think you would probably be able to see a hint of the second hand between the knees, but that's kind of a picky detail.
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U r absolutely rigth - she does need a second hand - the reason why its missing now is because I couldn't get it to look right so i erased it. o_o'
Its funny about the "tube" - thats how most of my picks look like (i cant draw torso right >_<
Draw over would be great - if u have time that is. If not its ok - ur comments are Very helpfull. thank u!!!!
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oohh
looks like a good start!
^^
hope u finish this lineart and colour it =3
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Thank u 
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