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ArmenDangerous — Rotah - The Process

Published: 2007-12-20 02:01:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 1057; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 23
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Description EDIT 2: Since I reworked this so many times, I thought I'd show the process. As well as some of my self deprecating remarks towards the designs I was unhappy with.

EDIT 1: Sorry for the double post. And my most sincere apologies to Ed, The Flenz, and DBR, who were kind enough to comment on the original version only to have me cruelly delete it without acknowledging their posts.

I just had to re-do this...as soon as I submitted it I dropped to my knees and cursed the heavens for the monstrosity I just unleashed upon the world.

So I touched it up.

This character's name comes from the Latin word which means wheel. The idea here is that she has a rotating wheel on her back that holds a myriad of weapons.
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Comments: 49

Afrodisium [2008-01-15 05:39:08 +0000 UTC]

Wicked cool character design.

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ArmenDangerous In reply to Afrodisium [2008-01-15 16:28:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a bunch.

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NGoff [2007-12-23 16:26:28 +0000 UTC]

Great design work on all of them! Nice to see the gradients mixed in with the cellshading.

The third one may be limited with action poses....or at least a pain to work with at times with certain shots...good luck! (Unless the wheel is magic and 'appears' on her back only when she's ready for a weapon.)


I like the second one...the piping on the armor...the green and black contrasting and intersecting bikini/wrapping....a very nice balanced, detailed and semi-intricate design.


I wanna see some action poses!

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ArmenDangerous In reply to NGoff [2007-12-23 22:39:58 +0000 UTC]

I'll get ya yer action poses.

I'm extremely close to having my style totally defined, and its just easier to draw the figure without throwing in angles and poses. But yeah, I'm actually kinda itching to get some cool poses done.

As always, you're tremendously helpful with your crits. Cheers buddy!

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NGoff In reply to ArmenDangerous [2007-12-25 22:25:40 +0000 UTC]

With a style like this, you do have to define those other angles too with care to match them up...so I can understand the delay.

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Candy2021 [2007-12-22 06:31:07 +0000 UTC]

I looove this chracter design I really do it's amazing.

she looks awesome evertyiem I see her design good job!!!

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ArmenDangerous In reply to Candy2021 [2007-12-22 06:35:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

Hey I just read some of that HP Fan Fiction and...

WOW.

That's all I can say.

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mindflenzing [2007-12-21 18:50:12 +0000 UTC]

Sweet. I do like the new design. I think you made the right call with this one .

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ArmenDangerous In reply to mindflenzing [2007-12-21 19:12:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks buddy. Yeah I soon as I finished it I knew I got it right. Glad you think so too.

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Chronorin [2007-12-21 18:17:53 +0000 UTC]

Nice... i thought she kept changing...

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ArmenDangerous In reply to Chronorin [2007-12-21 19:14:55 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, sorry about that. But its done now, I swear!

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Chronorin In reply to ArmenDangerous [2007-12-21 19:40:21 +0000 UTC]

Hey, no worries. I'm the worst when it comes to this.

A lot of my old Teen Titans/Kim Possible drawings got facelifts this year...

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DryBonesReborn [2007-12-21 15:25:05 +0000 UTC]

Neato.

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DryBonesReborn In reply to DryBonesReborn [2007-12-21 20:03:49 +0000 UTC]

I have to work on your pic. I got it scanned in, it's on my thumbdrive

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DryBonesReborn In reply to DryBonesReborn [2007-12-21 20:01:00 +0000 UTC]

I have to work on your pic. I got it scanned in, it's on my thumbdrive.

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ArmenDangerous In reply to DryBonesReborn [2007-12-21 19:15:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks buddy!

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kamikazekayti [2007-12-21 11:52:11 +0000 UTC]

And wahts so bad about a half naked gold plated storm trooper and an amazonian bikini contest finalist? I like all the deigns personally!

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ArmenDangerous In reply to kamikazekayti [2007-12-21 19:16:40 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thanks! Yeah I suppose I'm too hard on myself when I don't get something right. They're all fine I suppose, just not what I had in mind

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kamikazekayti In reply to ArmenDangerous [2007-12-21 19:51:14 +0000 UTC]

I understand! It can be awesome but if its not what I pictured, its not right!!

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RVeldhuyzen [2007-12-21 10:47:29 +0000 UTC]

Nice how you start out with an almost naked chick, and end up with one only showing the skin of her head and fingers ^_^

Just goes to show you don't need to make them half naked to make em easy to look at
Nice work mate.

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ArmenDangerous In reply to RVeldhuyzen [2007-12-21 10:52:46 +0000 UTC]

I know eh? Who would've thought the next stage after 1/2 naked and 3/4 naked would be fully clothed!

Thanks dude.

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PoisonRemedy [2007-12-20 23:25:08 +0000 UTC]

Nice, getting a kinda Mortal Kombat meets Conan vibe of this, very welcome lol The green is great, really brings the piece out

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ArmenDangerous In reply to PoisonRemedy [2007-12-20 23:27:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks dude. Any day my work is compared to or equated with Mortal Kombat is a good one

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PoisonRemedy In reply to ArmenDangerous [2007-12-20 23:31:19 +0000 UTC]

heheh, I'd second that lol, that game kicks ass. Your work's really coming along, you've hit a real stride with these more stylized pieces, they're kicking a lot of artistic butt

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ArmenDangerous In reply to PoisonRemedy [2007-12-20 23:46:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I've done a lot of sketches that I'm finishing up in Illustrator, so stay tuned!

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PoisonRemedy In reply to ArmenDangerous [2007-12-21 08:00:27 +0000 UTC]

Looking forward to 'em for sure!

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NijiChi [2007-12-20 20:06:50 +0000 UTC]

i like the green. lol. compaired to her skin its really loud.....chyeah

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ArmenDangerous In reply to NijiChi [2007-12-20 20:08:15 +0000 UTC]

Is loud bad? I wanted contrasty, but I don't know if I went overboard.

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NijiChi In reply to ArmenDangerous [2007-12-20 20:19:44 +0000 UTC]

well, i personally love brights colors randomly thrown in darks, so i think its a great thing! I dont know what you mean about the contrast...hmm...everything matches enough to not look bad lol.

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ArmenDangerous In reply to NijiChi [2007-12-20 20:38:20 +0000 UTC]

Oh okay, cool

Yeah I figured I needed something bright to offset the skin tone, so yeah. Thanks for the feedback!

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NijiChi In reply to ArmenDangerous [2007-12-20 21:43:35 +0000 UTC]

yeah, well, you were right about the bright color and the skin tone thing. :]
and your welcome

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dierat [2007-12-20 08:34:10 +0000 UTC]

That's pretty cool. But I just want to say that that wheel in it's design here would be extremely heavy. Her whole pose would be based on balancing this great weight on her back by tensing her leg muscles, bending her knees, and arching her feet. But even then, it would be really hard for her to perform any meaningful functions with that thing.. I would suggest considering slimming the mechanism down. It could be as little as a small, dense wheel in the center with slim scabbard-like strips that protrude to make the wheel. Anyway, that's just my opinion.

I likes the girl, especially her legs and feet.

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ArmenDangerous In reply to dierat [2007-12-20 17:36:27 +0000 UTC]

Yeah once I drew it I'm like..."there's no way someone will wanna carry that around". So in that respect your right. But that's the thing about drawing Fantasy characters, they don't have to make sense.

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Angeldess [2007-12-20 05:19:01 +0000 UTC]

AMAZING, yet again, lol. I def. love the idea of the wheel, holding all those weapons would never work otherwise and this kicks A$$! BTW great skin tone!

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ArmenDangerous In reply to Angeldess [2007-12-20 05:21:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks buddy

Yeah getting the wheel was tricky...but I'm glad you like how it turned out.

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PeppermintStrawberry [2007-12-20 03:58:12 +0000 UTC]

My God, your characters totally rock! Rotah looks so badass. She would differently kick butt if she was in a fighting/roleplaying game.

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ArmenDangerous In reply to PeppermintStrawberry [2007-12-20 04:32:31 +0000 UTC]

Hmm...I should keep that in mind if I ever join World of Warcraft or something.

Thanks for the kind words, and the Fav!

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PeppermintStrawberry In reply to ArmenDangerous [2007-12-20 04:42:59 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome.

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sandxl [2007-12-20 03:54:15 +0000 UTC]

whaaa that's fantastic man. i love the weapon assortment on her back.

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ArmenDangerous In reply to sandxl [2007-12-20 04:31:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks dude...those weapons were the fun part.

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sandxl In reply to ArmenDangerous [2007-12-20 10:21:57 +0000 UTC]

i reckon, i can almost feel the fun you would've had doing that part XD

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SeanVHarley [2007-12-20 03:04:23 +0000 UTC]

Very Awesome. Love the colors.

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ArmenDangerous In reply to SeanVHarley [2007-12-20 04:28:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks dude...I was having the most excruciating time trying to sort out the colours. I'm terrible with them. But I'm glad I managed to get them right for this

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mindflenzing [2007-12-20 02:58:21 +0000 UTC]

I actually rather liked the other design more, it was different than your usual fare. Don't get me wrong, I like this one too. It's just I'd rather have had you keep both (or move the other to scraps). But it's your call and your gallery.

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ArmenDangerous In reply to mindflenzing [2007-12-20 04:22:08 +0000 UTC]

Really? I suppose I can see how you liked the other one more. It was cleaner and easier to look at. What the hey, maybe I'll toss the other one in scraps.

Hey how's your Kaption Kontest going? So far I've only come up with a couple book titles. What are your thoughts on coarse language?

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mindflenzing In reply to ArmenDangerous [2007-12-20 15:48:40 +0000 UTC]

That would be cool.

I've got one completed, one supposedly on the way, and that's it. Language? I use language every day, it is the key to human survival... and I do mean foul language. Honestly, as long as it isn't too bad (the stuff 3 guys joke about at 2am after watching Superbad) I don't mind and partially bleeped 4 letter words are ok. I think statistically my average viewer is a highschool upperclassman on a site like this and I can always give a language warning on the link if it's a little much.

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kamikazekayti [2007-12-20 02:06:20 +0000 UTC]

YES!! She kicks ass!! She's very feirce looking! I love the idea of the wheel of weapons!!

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ArmenDangerous In reply to kamikazekayti [2007-12-20 02:11:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks buddy! The only problem I had was piling on all that detail and keeping her figure looking feminine. Hey that reminds me, you are awesome at doing exactly that, so I'ma go check out your gallery.

Right now!

Oh hey, before I go...thanks for the Fav!

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kamikazekayti In reply to ArmenDangerous [2007-12-20 17:39:22 +0000 UTC]

Did you check out my gallery for reference and advice? I feel so honored!!

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