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Published: 2014-02-14 16:21:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 854; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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Yes, this is Jane "Akai" Dalia. The outfit's my idea but inspired by the original design. I came up with this design as a part of a personal side project.Β
I am giving you all fair warning. ANY comments that are in any way related to the ongoing flame war and are not a genuine critique of my art will be hidden. If you want to whine at me, do it in one of my rants.
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Cute! ^^ Oh, and hey. 
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Thanks, LoyalSonicFan~ ;u; That means a lot to me.
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I know you've been through a lot because of her. 
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Yeah, I get how you feel. :/
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I'm real late on this, but how is Akai terrible? I only read your journal.
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You can look up all the video rants on YouTube. Just type in "Akai Dalia Rant". Sonic93's were the best, though, and, after you watch all of those, lemme know. I have one last one you should watch...
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I've seen them already. What's the one you have in mind?
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Here:Β www.youtube.com/watch?v=lEN59bβ¦
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It's that long? O.o It's real late where I live, and I need my sleep, but I'll see it tomorrow.
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Oh, okay. No problem. c:
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I watched it. 
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Nice to see you're still alive.
After that one critique I gave you, I won't write anything - at least not much - now. Nice pic, love the pose. Shading on the quills should be slightly different, though. It's not hair, so it shouldn't be shaded/drawn as such. Choice of clothing and body shape? Too slutty for my likes. But, hey, I didn't create her. Well-done, though.
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Thank you for the feedback
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I... never trust myself to do proper critiques... and I STAY OUT OF FLAME WARS!! Β XD
I think it's well-done, Tsuki. Β The only 'issue' in my opinion is the legs... They seem just a bit on the short side, in relation to the torso, and the feet are a bit tiny... but that's about it. Β It's... also just a tad distraction that her knees have, to my eyes, this sorta-shading look that isn't Β really prominent anywhere else.
... I actually wanted to leave a positive comment on AkaiDalia's "End of Reactions" pic, but comments were disabled... *sigh* Β I look at her stuff, and see the artwork is legitimately good, a far-cry better than mine... I really don't see how it could ignite such loathing.
... Crud, my comment's going to be hidden, isn't it?
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As I said I'm not getting into it here. Thanks for the critique.
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You are welcome, Silvy.
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