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NOTE: if you guys see any spelling errors please let me know. Thank you
yay! Part 2! I absolutely love Endive and Token, and Token keeps her tail hidden, so that’s why you don’t see it all the time.
wooooooooo scary spiders!
aww, poor ink…stop messing up your face.
round 2 part 1:-[link]
round 2 part 2:-~~~
round 2 part 3:-[link]
ink- is mine ^___^
Endive -
Token-
Elixia -
Zane -
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Poor Ink! People stop hitting him! We like his cute and adorable face as it is! D8
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I love that bow SO MUCH! Blade wings WITH A BOW!
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Aww, Token is ADORABLE in those first two panels... And Ink is such an adorable little fruitcake always...
"Wow. That's cool, but I'm still confused."... And the wings with a big bow on them....
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Spiders D8
lol
Oh btw... Ink's name isn't capitalized in one of the panels...
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thank you for the spell check
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"Please forgive me for being rough." - Ink
Oooh~ So nice and such a gentleman!
Once again, awesome story! *runs to read part 3*
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Pfffff! Haha! Gentleman…I find that funny ^___^
Glad you like the story! And thank you!!!
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lawl~
You're welcome! As I say, keep 'em up!!!
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I didn't know Token had a tail! She keeps it well hidden. Aww, poor Ink, he's so nice and people beat up on him all the time.
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Yeah, ink gets beat up a lot 
But that’s what happens when you hang around with pirates.
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Oh noes! what's happened to Ink?! D8
and here's the errors I spotted, thankfully not as long a list as the last one
-quit=quite (panel13)
-there=they're (panel17)
-Genisis's is just Genisis'. (panel30) I know this gets a lot of people but you dont add an extra S at the end of a word that already has an S to the end. Even when you're abbreviating.
-nothings=nothing's (panel32)
-your=you're (panel67)
-Ill=I'll (panel68)
-ill=I'll (panel86)
-"I kindly ask you to leave, then you shoot at me?" sounds better and makes more sense than the original quote. (panel90)
-awhile=a while (panel91)
keep at it, I'm loving these entries~
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ok fixed. Thanks for the corrections! That was nice of you to take the time to do that.
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no problem~
I'm a grammar nazi so I find grammar errors too easily and I kinda like doing it
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Well I greatly appreciate it.
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I'm glad I could be of help
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THASSALOTTASPIDERS! and hono! Goblintail to the face!
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THASALOTASPIDERSINDEED. lol. ink got pwnd
and thanks for the fav!
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