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Hello everybody !Well i have questions and i hope you will give me ur thinking about it.
This painting as u know it's UNREAL. Well i have an POSTER exercise in class. And ill use this pic as a perfume poster for it. Suppose everything in this pic is real as a photo, i mean the girl is a real person, and the sights are real too, just use PS to mix them.
So how do you feel when u see a poster like this and if ur a customer, do u like this kind of perfume poster ? and how is it in ur eyes ?
Well i asked too much, i hope you will help me to some decisions for it 
Now im making a new one for it but i want to know how people think about it
Thank you very much !
Aurory
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Comments: 46
I'd rather see this poster with your art on it than a real person
But it's very catchy! I'd love a perfume like that!
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Aaaaaaaarrrrrggggggghhhhhhhhh...............This is totally SUPERB!! Can I use this as a reference on my next photoshoot ?
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I like this concept, my only comment would be to make the necklace fall a bit more naturally, it makes it seem like gravity is pulling down (wich in this case it isnt, exactly)
In fact, I think you can get away with Not illustrating the product at all, if you can remark at some corner what it is.
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Well, it gives the impression that when you use this perfume, all your problems will go away, you will be stress free, and somewhere where your hopes and dreams can fly free. The colours add to that effect...also cause i love green 
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I'd probably put her eyes closed like she's smelling..or relaxing. It's very beautiful as is though.
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kinda makes me think the perfume is a nice, breezy, flower scented one which i bet someone would totally buy...
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I'd wanna buy that perfume!!! This sells well I like it! It's so weird and cool and trippy.
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I think it's awesome!!! 
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Do be completely honest with you, I like it. I think that is is very fitting and the colors work nicely. And keeping the actual purfume small there in the corner is good.
First the eyes are attracted to the pretty lady and the green fantasy like pasture, then tou start reading and seeing what is all about.
Vey nice design. And it would be perfect for the design world because its eye catching and pleasing to the eye.
Kind of makes me wanna buy the perfume even though its not real. XD
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i love this piece and i faved it! I might change the fact that the picture is vertical and make it horizontal again...looks more natrual. The perfume would be flowery in my eyes... i would love it as a perfume ad
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I think it would be very good for a parfume~ Like I said in my original comment~ It looks like a dream~ mystic and very interessting~ If the model fits and everything will be well done~ It would be a great poster
But how it is on this example~ the parfume is .. in the background i think~ (and i don't like the "deep green" text ^^")
If this would be done with more ... love (haha) it would fit good ^^
awww... and it would be funny if the fish would swim to the parfume
haha..
And I'm very interessted in your other idea ^^
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Yeah my attention goes to her necklace, the orange butterfly on the upper side (which is well focused whilst the blade of grass where she's on is so blurred) and the pink butterfly under the written "AURORA".
The perfume doesn't catch all the attention it deserves, maybe because the bottle has a shape that isn't well distinguishable as a perfume bottle... it should be bigger and more captivating... I'm more attracted by the lady than by the perfume.
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If this were an actual advertisement poster just as it is, I'd buy it. If it were real, I'd buy it as well! This would make an absolutely GORGEOUS commercial/ad thing. xD Great job. I absolutely LOVE how she looks and how she seems so relaxed, elegant, captivated, beautiful, etc. xD No words can describe how beautiful she looks. If you were selling perfume, I'll pay for it! >D
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The picture is really amazing and would be great for a perfume ad, EXCEPT for the weird orange thing covering her chest. I think that there should be something else there. It just doesn't match the rest of the picture; which is soft and natural looking, and then suddenly there is a disease growing on her breast, lol. Anywho, good luck with that.
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i agree - direct some butterflies or petals to it to draw attention... or make the perfume bigger so it captures a bit more space....
but other then that, i could look at that poster for hours!!
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Zhaana said it well. I think if you want to give the perfume more attention, perhaps you could put a couple fish or butterflies around it. They don't have to be looking at it or anything, but just making the viewer look toward that direction.
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It's definetely very fitting for a perfume ad! It wouldn't look out of place in a women's magazine. 
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I think the poster as a total is very beautiful and eyecatching. The nature environment combined with this dreamy lady makes you expect a very nice fresh and springlike fragrance. One little point of critique: the woman draws so much attention, while maybe the attention should go out to the perfume. At least, that seems logical, no? Maybe it's an idea to make the perfume larger, so that it's totally clear to your potential customers what it is they wanna buy...
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When I look at this I just want to close my eyes and smell the grass and feel the breeze on my face, I definately like it even though I dont wear perfume myself.
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when i see it i have a good feeling... im sure it would catch my attention when i saw the poster on my way to work...
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I feel the perfume would be soft,a summer perfume that smell sorta like flowers,but I don't wear perfume.
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a beautiful advertisement!!!!
very cool indeed!!
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i really like this idea but i would put the girl horizontally rather than vertically. so basically she would be lying down on the grass and in all the space above her there will be the sky and all the writing for the ad.
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it makes me feel light and summery, happiness on air its gorgeous
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It would definitely be the best perfume ad I've ever seen before. It really gives off a feeling of calm or being at peace with the world and yourself, beauty, fresh and just a whole bunch of stuff that you want throughout the day.
I like the necklace. If you were flipping through a magazine the necklace would catch your eye and then the rest of the picture would come into play.
I definitely do agree with making the product a little more noticable though.
Other than that the picture is gorgeous.
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I'd say you should make it a landscape, and include the text in roughly the same position. Then place the product to the right, in a box (with a black background) by itself, keeping the same height.
If that doesn't suit, make the product more noticable - at the moment it's blue and green on a teal background....doesn't attract my attention at all really.
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Its defently a perfume poster that would make me- hm it looks so refreashing, its like its enviting me to try it out!
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It fits very well a perfume advertising !! o_O I'd make the product larger as said above !
Othewise about the color necklace I don't think you have to change it, but it'd be better if we could see some red/orange tones on the product.... It'd more catch the eye on the product I dunno...
But i like this way too, the eyes are attracted towards the girl first, then we see the product and title after....from left to right. It give envy to know what is the flavor of the perfume ! something fresh, light..perfect for women ^^
Maybe the product could have a shape of fish/grass/flower ( think about Kenzo perfume xD ) / or something about flying.... 
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Yeah ! Thank you for ur critiques, they'll help me much
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Hi!
I like the grass thingie and all the butterflies and the girl
it speaks to me and says "fresh" but I would change the colour of her necklace to some other colour, like blue/greenish or something because to me it doesnt fit with the enite message.
its a very nicely done poster in all other ways
(and me like the fish thing
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grass under the sea or sea in the sky? 
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yeah its a great idea
very parfumy
what are your thoughts about the neckalce, bikini(?)
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Well i think ill do a little more with nacklace, change the form, color ... . About bikini, well let me think more about it, cause i want the girl look natural, more close to nature
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nah, that was not what I ment. I simply wasnt sure if it was a bikini or a necklace since it was hanging over her boobs ^^
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:rof: oops i see. It was a nacklace
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ok,well I would suggest change of colour and maybe size
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Yeah ! Thank you again for ur time
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well I think it's rather fitting, although I would recommend you make the actual product larger or more obvious somehow.
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yeah ill do it, but the product is also drawn too 
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really? heh, nice job on rendering the product, fooled me
but yeah, I think you're certainly headed in the right direction with this
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