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awesomesir — The Huge Comeback
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Description On a faraway kingdom, one over looked by many, was an interesting civilization. These people lived normal and average lives. They worked in the morning and slept at night. Nothing exciting happened and no crimes were committed. Some would call this a paradise if they weren’t aware of the dark figure that ruled over this quaint kingdom.

At the center of this kingdom, towering high like an obelisk, was the grand castle where a mighty, tyrannical Queen lives. She ruled this kingdom poorly, keeping all the goods and riches all for herself none for the citizens. She even goes as far as to feed off of her own citizens. She'd her subjects in a false sense of security, making them think that she would spare their lives if they didn't question her or her twisted motives, but no one was really safe from the tyrannical Queen's blood-lust.

The kingdom wasn't always like this, it used to be a kinder and safer kingdom, one free from such terrible tyranny, the previous Queen back then was a much kinder spirit, caring for her citizens and always put their problems before her own. It wasn't until the kingdom was invaded by a great force of mighty power and gigantic stature, this creature towered over the kingdom and attacked mercilessly. No one could defend themselves from this beast and at the end, she devoured the Queen and proclaimed herself as ruler of the kingdom. Anyone who thought of themselves as brave enough and dared to stand up to her tyranny would end up getting eaten or banished to slave work for the highest bidder.

No one dared to stand up to the tyrannical Queen, she kept them all in a constant state of fear and oppression. She ruled with an iron fist, taking whatever she wanted from whoever she wanted and no one would say anything in return. This plan of the Queen was perfect in her attempt to control the masses. But the day was coming when the Queen was finally going to get her comeuppance.

The day was an average day, much like any other day. Everyone was minding their business, trying not to do anything that would provoke the Queen in any way what so ever. The people did the jobs they were told to do and no one would dare to argue otherwise. Everything was the way the Queen wanted it to be, when suddenly a loud booming noise called all the citizens attention. High above, a huge explosion spread out in the sky, flames and smoke billowing out, reaching out to the clouds. The citizens looked up in awe to witness the bright spectacle.

Splinters of wood rained down from the explosion, landing harmlessly on the ground. The boom roaring in the sky, frightening anyone unaware of the events up high. Everyone wondered what was happening, and if this had anything to do with the Queen.

As if on cue, the Queen stormed out of her castle, the explosion interrupting her important Queenly duties, to investigate what was making all that noise outside. The Queen and all her citizens looked up at the explosion in the sky, confused by the sudden occurrence. Suddenly, amidst all the debris falling and the dark cloud spreading from the explosion, they saw something fall from, something tiny in the distance barreling towards the ground, a small cloth behind it. They followed the tiny objects descent down through the roof of a nearby farm house.

The Queen, towering over her citizens, stomps her way over to the farmhouse to find what the mysterious object, hoping it might be something valuable.

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Pain.

So much Pain.

The mousey girl slowly opened her eyes and scanned her surroundings, nothing but hay, must have fallen into a large bale of hay. She dug herself out and found herself on the inside of a broken down farmhouse. Looked like something through it.

Oh right, you… through the roof.

She pulled herself out of the bale of hay, brushing the strands of her ripped maiden outfit, ready to get her bearings of the area. But before she could take the first step, the ground shook. And it shook again. And again, each time louder and closer, something big was coming! She had to think, hide somewhere before the mysterious giant arrived.

But it wasn’t fast enough, suddenly a loud crunch pierced the air as the farmhouse began rising up, the walls tearing of the floor and rising up with the roof, revealing the massive, scaly beast that tore the house from its foundation. The beast towered over the tiny maiden, who immediately recognized the beast. That bright blue scaly skin, those large, sharp teeth sticking out her mouth, the big red eyes staring down at her, the horns poking out of the side of her head, the wings, the tail, the talons. There was no mistaking it, it’s the Chupacabra Queen, the one who tried get rid of her when tiny lad tried to stand up to this beast horrible reign.

“Oh, it’s just another of my citizens. Did you try to escape from your owner, tiny mistress?” the Chupacabra babied her, kneeling down to get a closer look at her. She didn’t remember her, “Well lucky for you you’re back at home with me,” she responded, giving the small girl a wide sharp grin as she plucked mousey gal from the ground and carried her back to the kingdom.

‘Well…’ she thought, ‘this didn’t exactly as I planned.’

“Queen, Queen! What was that thing that feel from the sky?” One of the villagers asked distraught, worried about their safety.

“Nothing to worry about, my feeble meals,” the Queen reassured her people, “It’s just a traitor who that they could sneak their way back in,” she answering, dangling the poor gal by the fingertips.

The citizens gasped, they knew who this small girl was, “Fiona?” someone whispered. They knew as the one who proved to be the biggest threat to the Queen. The Queen was so angered that she had sold her to a vicious that lived far off on a castle on top of a mountain, the scariest and deadliest point of the land. One of the cruelest punishment a traitor could endure, she’s luckily she wasn’t sent to the Carnivores Griffin.

But the villagers were murmuring among each other, ‘How did she escape the dragon?’ they asked, ‘How did she manage to make her way back here?’ But none could ask her for fear of being marked a traitor as well, so they watched silently as the Queen carried Fiona into the castle.

Once in the castle, the Queen made her way to the throne room, where the Queen spends most of her day ruling and deciding the proper punishment for citizens who broke one of the thousands of new laws she had placed. The large Chupacabra dropped Fiona before the throne and head back outside.

“You wait here while I take care of the ruckus you cause outside. And when I return I’ll find a punishment of which you will not return from!” The Queen threatened before slamming the behind her.

Fiona, sitting on her aching bum, looked around the room, noticing the lavish, classy and obviously expensive decorations that hung finely on the walls of the castle. A red carpet stretched from the door where the beast left all the way to a massive throne, most likely built from the gold the Queen had taken or stolen from the civilians. This throne wasn’t here the last time Fiona had set foot in this room. The greedy Chupacabra must have thought that the previous iron throne wasn’t suitable enough for her insatiable desires. Besides the throne was strange red tank, a hose leading up to the arm of the throne.

Puzzled by the mysterious placement of it, Fiona looked to ask someone and found a small guard standing by the doorway, “Hey, what’s that tank for?” she asked loudly to the guard at the far end of the room.

“That’s the blood tank the Queen uses to drink the blood from while she sits at her throne.” The guard answered back, his helmet hiding the face disgust he had explaining it.

‘This is a new level of stubborn laziness that the damn Queen has brought herself down to’ Fiona thought to herself, approaching the tank and observing it’s mechanism. It was primarily simple, a valve on the front for the Queen to turn one way if she wanted and the other way when she’s done. But on the other side, the one facing the wall, was a dial that controlled how much was pumped through the hose and into the gluttonous mouth of the beastly Queen. Fiona tapped her cheek forming an idea. Twisting the dial, she could hear the tank revving up as it prepared to give a larger intake of blood. ‘What are the chances she’ll hear it’ Fiona thought to herself as she kept turning the dial, the revving gradually growing louder, sounding like a constant hum of a thousand bees at this point. She hoped the Queen would be too stubborn to notice it or even do something about it. She emerged from behind tank, the Queen hadn’t returned yet, the only other person was the guard, who Fiona gave a reassuring smile, “I’m just admiring the tank, is all!” she yelled from the distance, hoping the he won’t rat on her. The guard simply nodded.

As Fiona returned to her spot, sitting back to her original position, the doors swung open, the Chupacabra Queen entering with a handful of screaming citizens. “Look what you made me do.” The Queen said, blaming Fiona for her following actions. She opened a small cabinet on the side of the wall, cleverly disguised, and she dropped the civilians into the opening, closing it swiftly. The screaming continued before a loud metallic noise drowned out the muffled screaming as well as most of the noises around the room. The open would give the people outside the chance to be able to hear the metallic grinding from the throne room.

“Now then!” the Queen began, speaking loudly to be heard over the commotion from the noise, taking a seat on her golden throne, “Let’s talk about your new punishment! Obviously, selling you wasn’t enough! So instead, what I’m gonna do, is have as clean up duty at the cellar dungeon! You’ll be cleaning up the blood and guts that are left over from machine or leak from the pipes! Won’t that be fun?” She smiled malignantly, showing her rows of sharp, knife-like teeth. Fiona didn’t nothing but stare silently, waiting for the Chupacabra to take a drink from her tank, “Do you hear me!!” the Queen roared, practically snarling at her new prisoner, Fiona quickly nodded in advance. “Good, now get out of here! Your face is making feel disgusted!” she dismissed her. Fiona, feeling defeated she couldn’t see the outcome of her plan turned and left the throne room, the guard closing the door behind her.

The Queen, satisfied with her impressive ruling and magnificent punishment skills, leaned back on her throne, grabbed the nozzle of the hose, “Oh guard~!” she called, “Would you kindly turn on the blood vessel for me?” The guard, nodding in response, hurried over to the tank and grabbed onto the valve, ready to turn at the Queen’s command.

The guard was always in charge for valve duty as the Queen sat too high on her throne to be bothered with reaching for the valve. He watched the Queen place the nozzle firmly in her mouth, her tusks softly pinching the hose in place. She waved her hand, signaling the guard to turn the valve. The guard, hoping he guessed the feisty rebel’s plan correctly, turned the valve and watched as the tank shook violently, trying to pump the asked amount of blood, before it roared to the life. The hose expanded as unforeseen amount of blood began making its way up to the nozzle and into the Queen’s mouth.

It all within seconds, the roaring, the pumping and the second the Queen turned her head to look at the tank, it her like tidal wave into her mouth. The force of the current knocked her head back as the blood flowed from the nozzle, down her throat and into her awaiting stomach. Like a balloon stuck on a helium tank, actually forget that simile, that’s exactly what’s happening!

The Chupacabra’s gut began to blimp out immediately, expanding in all directions as the amount of blood that she was drinking was accumulating at a ridiculous rate. The guard quickly began running towards the exit as the walls of the belly was reaching out towards him, already reaching a massive size. The Queen could nothing but squirm, trying to pull the nuzzle off her mouth desperately trying to escape, but she saw that her fate was sealed as orb began towering over her, stretch marks racing up the flanks on their way to the center navel. A loud creaking resounded through the walls of the castle, violent groans following quickly behind.

She heard the groans, making her stop in her tracks. Fiona turned back, seeing the guard run past her and out of the castle. It was happening! Her eyes widened with happiness as she ran towards the throne, hoping to see her work before it’s all over.

The growth of the gut was slowing down as either the gut was running out of skin to stretch or her tank was emptying. The Queen hoped it was the latter as she felt the pressure quickly build. She could feel it, mere seconds were left before the red orb of hers would give out and paint the kingdom in what was once the Queen.

She shut her eyes and waited for it… BANG! The tank blew a fuse, the force to pump any more into the over stretched gut was too much for it to handle. Queen slowly opened her eyes and saw her gut, massive, frail and packed tight with blood, it survived the ordeal.

Suddenly, Fiona flung the doors wide open, the edge of the door hitting the gut at point blank. The Queen cringe, that was it.

KABLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH!!!!!

The day was forever commemorated as the day Queen Fiona freed her kingdom from the malevolent Chupacabra Beast. The story of her travels to the kingdom inspired many to never give up on their dreams. And the Kingdom lived countless days of happiness.

The End
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shinyvolcaronaplz [2017-01-29 18:51:50 +0000 UTC]

Honestly... Kind of want to see Fiona round out a little from her position~

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awesomesir In reply to shinyvolcaronaplz [2017-01-29 19:26:19 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, I think I might draw that

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15fap9988 [2015-08-07 17:22:00 +0000 UTC]

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awesomesir In reply to 15fap9988 [2015-08-07 20:32:19 +0000 UTC]

Oh, a Spin would've been interesting! Maybe I will someday if the creative juices allow me to

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