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Axel-Doi — The Lunar Eclipse (Part 7) by-nc-nd

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Published: 2015-05-09 20:12:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 4037; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 68
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Description Hey everyone I’m back with and new comic strip! In this segment, Lady Maya is now doing some investigation into Princess Luna’s history. She discover an unusual children storybook.


Software used: Poser Pro Game Dev, Manga Studio, Photoshop CC 2014


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Comments: 17

mylittlelaboratories [2015-05-09 21:54:04 +0000 UTC]

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i think that this tory is EXTREMELY WEIRD, i have a lot of trouble understanding it and it totaly destroys MLP. (No offence to the Creator) you have a lot of talent, but you are wasting your potential into this instead of making somg amazingly good. you ight so want to know that the 3D kind of drawings are not the most appropriate for a comic or whatever you want to call it. Many people tried the 3D artwork in a comic, but only a few actually knew success. the technique is good and the story is (kinda) originall. but the visual part of it is the biggest problem in this series, it almost looks as if it was made with Gmod's visual engine. but you should still work on it, maybe keep working on it and change the visual version of it.

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Axel-Doi In reply to mylittlelaboratories [2015-05-09 22:07:26 +0000 UTC]

Yes this is different, but you have to understand that this story takes place in an alternate universe from the canon version. I have to do it this way so I can tell the story this way. As for the 3D visuals, I understand that there are limits where it comes to this style, but again it depends on whoever look at this this style. Thank you for the critique nonetheless. This work may not be for you, but this story arc is kind of important to me because of the meaning behind it whether the visual itself.

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mylittlelaboratories In reply to Axel-Doi [2015-05-09 22:10:53 +0000 UTC]

i never said that you should stop it, as i said, you have a lot of potential, but you need to know that you can always make it better, and weather the critics are good or bad, they always will try (for the ones who don't just want to get you down) to make your art better

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Axel-Doi In reply to mylittlelaboratories [2015-05-09 22:44:53 +0000 UTC]

I'll do my best on it. I promise.

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mylittlelaboratories In reply to Axel-Doi [2015-05-10 04:33:46 +0000 UTC]

that's all we're askin' for

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WitchWandaMaximoff [2015-05-16 22:10:45 +0000 UTC]

i like the clothes you use good work nya !

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Axel-Doi In reply to WitchWandaMaximoff [2015-05-17 17:40:44 +0000 UTC]

Oh thank you!

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WitchWandaMaximoff In reply to Axel-Doi [2015-05-17 18:54:25 +0000 UTC]

Nya nothing of your work and considerable screen with ultra high-grade!

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Dark-Lemur [2015-05-11 03:34:35 +0000 UTC]

Eclipses are just God's way of resetting after a paradox.

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RK-Striker-JK-5 [2015-05-10 22:19:00 +0000 UTC]

Okay, one heck of a cliffhanger there!

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Axel-Doi In reply to RK-Striker-JK-5 [2015-05-10 23:49:29 +0000 UTC]

Hee hee. The truth will be revealed in the next strip! 😄

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L-MASTER [2015-05-10 04:02:31 +0000 UTC]

GREAT! TT^TT

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Axel-Doi In reply to L-MASTER [2015-05-10 13:06:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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VenandiArt [2015-05-10 01:38:47 +0000 UTC]

Nice atmosphere and story you're putting together here.

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Axel-Doi In reply to VenandiArt [2015-05-10 13:07:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I'm building everything up for the real story that's coming soon.

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DB3D [2015-05-09 21:51:09 +0000 UTC]

i love this sort of
The attention to detail is awesome and story line is kool
excellent render work

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Axel-Doi In reply to DB3D [2015-05-10 13:08:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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