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Published: 2012-10-05 01:41:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 114; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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The chunky soup-like substance ran down her chin as a look of horror swept over her face. The strong sour smell burned my nostrils as I attempted to wipe it up with a roll of paper towels. It soaked through the layers of towels, touching my bare skin, warm and sticky.Related content
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ok here's a question. Was it her or you that had puked cause the poem starts in 3rd person then goes into first.
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the friend was the one that puked
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ah ok. but you get how it could confuse some people?
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Trying really hard to not think too much about this one.
It...works. It's just disgusting. And yet, it works well enough that I like it, so there's that.
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I know! My teacher's like "Okay, now write about cleaning up your friend's puke" ....
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Woah you have a weird English teacher! mine is too though. she once told us, "Write about what you think the color blue would taste like."
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haha awesome. Yeah, my English teacher is a little on the weird side, but she's a really good teacher.
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